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One Symptom of What Is Wrong.

Who needs parades or who gets the wing?
We have no need for carols to sing.
For what matters today
is:" Get out of my way!"
as Black Friday and bargains are king.

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Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 6:10:00 PM

Hello, Gerard! Stopping by real quick to ask you to put the word ~sandcastle~ on your contest entry.. I'm still in the middle of judging. Sorry! I just noticed it right now. And i so love your entry. Hopefully you get my notice before i close contest. God bless* SKAT

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 4:47:00 PM

lol, bargains are king, you bet, lol, sorry to hear about the shoves, excellent limerick:)

James Fraser

Date: 11/29/2010 2:12:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win Gerard with this witty Limerick, in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/29/2010 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Gerard! Soup Mail. Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 5:25:00 AM

Congratulations Gerard on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/28/2010 9:24:00 PM

That is about it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 4:19:00 PM

Good job, Gerard. YOu got it right!! And congratulations on your winning poem! Luv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/28/2010 4:10:00 PM

seems about right Gerard! Nailed it in very few words. Congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/28/2010 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Gerard

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2010 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2010 10:09:00 AM

Get out of my way!" as Black Friday and bargains are king. "Yep, Wrong King, True Love is forgotten!" "Congratulations" on a worthy poem's recognition! Agape, Moses

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/28/2010 8:56:00 AM

You limericked it right out of the park with this one, Gerald. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C