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One Symptom of What Is Wrong.

Who needs parades or who gets the wing?
We have no need for carols to sing.
For what matters today
is:" Get out of my way!"
as Black Friday and bargains are king.

holidaysatiresociallimerick

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Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 6:10 PM

Hello, Gerard! Stopping by real quick to ask you to put the word ~sandcastle~ on your contest entry.. I'm still in the middle of judging. Sorry! I just noticed it right now. And i so love your entry. Hopefully you get my notice before i close contest. God bless* SKAT

Sheri Fresonke Harper

December 2, 2010 at 4:47 PM

lol, bargains are king, you bet, lol, sorry to hear about the shoves, excellent limerick:)

James Fraser

November 29, 2010 at 2:12 PM

Many congratulations on your win Gerard with this witty Limerick, in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Audrey Haick

November 29, 2010 at 12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Gerard! Soup Mail. Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 29, 2010 at 5:25 AM

Congratulations Gerard on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

November 28, 2010 at 9:24 PM

That is about it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

November 28, 2010 at 4:19 PM

Good job, Gerard. YOu got it right!! And congratulations on your winning poem! Luv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne

November 28, 2010 at 4:10 PM

seems about right Gerard! Nailed it in very few words. Congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 28, 2010 at 2:08 PM

Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Gerard

Sara Kendrick

November 28, 2010 at 12:35 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

John Freeman

November 28, 2010 at 10:09 AM

Get out of my way!" as Black Friday and bargains are king. "Yep, Wrong King, True Love is forgotten!" "Congratulations" on a worthy poem's recognition! Agape, Moses