One Swallow Makes a Summer

iced tea cools the brow merlot, any repast endows- sips of summer,now

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 8:35:00 AM

That is a very cute phrase, Brian, sips of summer!!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/21/2011 7:19:00 AM

nicely written... happy summer..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/21/2011 1:34:00 AM

I love some of that tea! Here in the South of the U.S. they call it "SWEET TEA"! Merlot is good as well! This poem also! ---I do appreciate you judging two of my poems as winners. Open Sores 1st, Morning Mess 3rd. How do you find time to hold all of those contests? Locally, I hold quite a bit of contests for school age children. We are on a mission to bring poetry back to the top! The children have responded well!

Constance La France

Date: 6/20/2011 7:07:00 AM

so visual in a few words, the skill of a poet, well done and thanks so much Brian for my placement in your Two Thru Twelve contest, I am so very honored~~

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/20/2011 3:07:00 AM

Clever piece , Brian . The name even sent me in the wrong direction . Rgds from the Irish Cuckoo !!! ...

Tracy Edwards

Date: 6/19/2011 4:30:00 AM

Oo nice thoughts of summer...just what i needed on this cold winters night...nice write Brian xx