One Shepherd Waits

Wheels of life overtake busy hours
racing along fast highway of time,
and jammed thoughts forget sunset’s delight
while roses, once in love, stoop... tires fizzle,
even when the hills fondle the peaks
of embossed leaves, there are no hours
for leisure on the streams, not yet.

Still, when evanescent light
envelopes all things tender and dusk floats
along a wing of clouds, He waits there...
The shepherd becoming one of his sheep
guiding freely, moving quietly
content as breath of air,
telling me to listen softly where
a fragile voice awakens a hum
within my bosom... a Source unseen
yet felt deeply, as if to comfort 
this restless spirit that the journey lies
in not asking why, but trusting 

how, in silence, He waits with me.


Richard Lamoreux's Tell Me
3/31/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/26/2015 6:34:00 PM
Such beauty in your verse...Love it Nette. Congrats
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Date: 4/26/2015 9:19:00 AM
I too experience God in silence. Thanks for entering my contest Nette.
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:07:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome win in Richard Lamoureux's "Tell Me" contest. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 4/23/2015 6:23:00 PM
Free verse yet flows in dreamy fashion as yor style always is, dear Nette. Congratulations for placing in Richard's contest. HUgs! :)
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Date: 4/5/2015 2:14:00 PM
This is another magnificent write from you my very dear friend, Nette. I like it a lot. Thank you so much for sharing! Wish you good luck in the contest! Happy Easter once again! Hope you're doing well always and hope we've optimum weather there in the Phil. love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 4/3/2015 8:07:00 AM
1st place win for me, your verse brightens what should be beautiful said. a 7+++ Happy Easter
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Date: 4/3/2015 2:09:00 AM
Ooh.... marvellous Nette... loved the imagery... the shepherd not inly guides the sheeps but becomes one with them... beautiful lines... that hum I guess every person must ve felt it .... best wishes n hugs . Nad! #7
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Date: 4/2/2015 10:43:00 AM
A touching and revealing poem that reaches out and calms your heart. Emile.
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:09:00 AM
just wow!! i like every line, graceful as always.. :)! Nette see you soon.. :)!
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Date: 3/31/2015 9:57:00 PM
I'm in awe of the heartfelt beauty in every line...a fav! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:20:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go.."even when the hills fondle" I especially like that line..Thanks for the visit to my page..Stressed/unstressed is trochee right..I am just trying to get a handle on it..Sara
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Date: 3/31/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hello dear poet ! I love commenting on a write like this one. And not often do I get to do so, because of my thirst for the terse write, they keepsss me quite busy with comments. Anywhooooo; I love the apertures between your stanza's Nette, in this write especially. That clutch of your, (excuse me) "bosom", managed to cause the zenith in this write ! The entire write, in a poetic realization flowed well ! Have a blessed day my friend !...Much love, james
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Date: 3/31/2015 3:08:00 PM
nette, beautiful words in answer to tell me, A7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:20:00 PM
- A really beautiful poem,Nette - I always enjoy reading your words - I wish you a happy Easter :) - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2015 10:54:00 AM
wow nette love this piece from you a blessing of a pen sorry not around much these days wishing you a blessed week dear pal
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Date: 3/31/2015 10:40:00 AM
The deep connection between man and his god is totally comforting. You pen your feelings with such pure honesty, beauty.
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:21:00 AM
Your unwavering faith in a higher Source imbues this majestic poem with much grace.Supreme, gentle, Nette!
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