One Senior's Sonnet

One Senior’s Sonnet

The feelings are frozen, fetid in time,
Decisions denied to the dwindling mind;
Possibilities piling like lengths of twine;
Acceptance of aging cannot be blind.

Duties demean while trying to hold on;
Where hides the help while faculties dim?
Will compassion kindle the fire now gone?
Can joints jump for joy in arthritic limbs?

The sun is sinking in a twilight red rest.
Peace being pursued is allowed conquest.
And tasks like talisman line up in rows
In order opting one by one were chose.

The frightening fear of morning’s trembly dawn,
With prayer and persistence is dead and gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Capitano Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Mortality is a living matter.
Lindley Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Beautiful sonnet, so very well expressed on the subject of aging. As we feel those old age aches, we must remember how we always prayed we'd at least make it into our old age. As the alternative was not too enticing. lol Solid 7..
Hauser  Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 1:36 AM
Brings many thoughts to this aging mind!
Kithinji Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Well conceived and given a life of its own.
Wanter Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thank you....
Vaso Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 3:27 PM
The older we get the more these thoughts seem to be with us, beautiful sonnet!
Wanter Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Thank you. I so admire your poetry.
P  Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Very affecting sonnet, much fodder for thought here, the aging process is much maligned but your inspired poetry has elevated it.
Wanter Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your comment.
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Sunlite Wanter, i see reflectiveness and truth here... Alliteration is awesome. Linda
Wanter Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Thank you. This seemed negative, but there are some good points, too.
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