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One of the Two H's

i was just about to take a step through the gates when one of my shoelace s broke

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/27/2019 10:05:00 AM

You might have to explain this one to me. HappyNewYear Buddy.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/27/2019 10:57:00 AM

Richard, they say at the end we are either going to H eaven or H ell. So I was just thinking about that pause right before stepping into which one, because after that it becomes everlasting (so they day).

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/27/2019 10:54:00 AM

Cin cin Richard. I'm trying New Year's stuff, and this one was a test space monkey to see what would happen out there in internet space that we all share.