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One Night Cut Short In a Haunted Manor

My car ran out of gas. I found myself alone and walking down an unknown road. I looked to find a house where I might stop to call someone and then get my car towed. The first house I could find was very big. It was a manor, but it was so old. Although it looked run down, I saw a light, and wanting help, I needed to be bold. I went up to the door. I knocked and knocked. Was no one home? But what about that light? I turned the knob. The door had not been locked! I pushed my way in with a little fright. I called out, “Is there anybody home?” A voice then said to me, “I’ll be your host. Come sit and chat. There’s just one little thing. You cannot see me, for I am a ghost!” I saw nobody there, but my skin crawled because the voice I could distinctly hear was masculine . I felt as if someone were right there whispering into my ear! I turned around and sped right out of there. No other house I saw. I got no tow. Ten miles to town I ran, and you can bet the speed I ran was anything but slow! Jan. 15, 3019 for Tania Kitchin's One Night In a Haunted Manor Contest

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Date: 1/22/2019 10:56:00 AM
Hi Andrea, A spooky, haunted tale which was nail biting right up to the bitter end. so well written Andrea, lots of luck in the contest ,but you don't need luck girl, you've got the talent! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 1/20/2019 12:23:00 PM
Oh, no, I'm laughing and I am in awe of how you can make such a great tale from poetry with such a beat, that makes me want to sing.
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Date: 1/18/2019 4:41:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. It was spooky and well written. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/18/2019 8:14:00 AM
Pretty impressive run...better than Forest Gump! Love it!
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Date: 1/16/2019 3:53:00 PM
Reminds me of the Rocky Horror show, great poem, always a pleasure to read your poetry Andrea...
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Date: 1/16/2019 1:56:00 PM
A touch of the twilight zone, well written Andrea.I love stories like that. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 1/16/2019 9:45:00 AM
The sight of a ghost makes us speed away...Nicely penned Andrea..
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Date: 1/16/2019 7:36:00 AM
Good luck for the contest! If this is a true story, glad you made it out of there. If not, it is still a nicely written tale.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/16/2019 9:03:00 AM
of course it is fiction, Gail. I wonder with all the ghost tales out there if anyone ever had a ghost talk to them!
Date: 1/15/2019 11:52:00 PM
Very good Andrea. I am catching up on poetry today. Best wishes for the contest! xxoo
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Date: 1/15/2019 4:45:00 PM
G'day Andrea … did the run to town get you fit Andrea. A haunting experience can lead to extra efforts - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/15/2019 6:24:00 PM
I was already fit or how could I have done it? haha
Date: 1/15/2019 4:25:00 PM
Haunted house for sure!
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Date: 1/15/2019 4:19:00 PM
I like the title, Andrea, and I understand fully why you had to cut your night short. I would have been out the door the second I heard the first word. Nice.
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