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One Mourning Dove

One Mourning Dove At my kitchen table On a cold and sunny day, A gray dove spied and stared at me, He took my mind away. So still he sat outside my window, Puffed fat against the cold, Once I think I heard him mourn, So still we stayed, he bold. He ate my bread this morning, Pigged the birds’ sunflower seeds, Could he be telling me “Thank You?” Or “Give me more, more, pretty please?” My attention would stay upon that bird, My book unread, the day waiting, A dove studying me, I studying him, Our way of communicating.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/12/2017 1:16:00 AM
This is delightful...those moments when we see something that captivate us are amazing :-) My favorite line is "Puffed fat against the cold."! :-) Splendid writing, a joy to read. many blessings to you, lynn
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:04:00 PM
The little things make life so interesting, well done Sunlite...
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Date: 3/6/2017 8:28:00 PM
Great imagery in your lovely dove poem Sunlite; can imagine the whole scene~I'm guessing that the bird was asking for more seeds! Enjoyed!~Che :)
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Date: 3/6/2017 4:38:00 PM
Puffed fat against the cold.. I saw your bird friend vividly in this poem !
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Date: 3/6/2017 11:57:00 AM
This is different and delightful. A moment separate from time illustrated for readers to view. Beautifully served, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/6/2017 11:35:00 AM
I went out with my daughter and filled the bird feeder...I love observing them in the morning
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/6/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, Tim. I never get bored with watching them.
Date: 3/6/2017 11:04:00 AM
I can visualize this beauty.So loved this poem.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/6/2017 11:48:00 AM
I so appreciate your comments!
Date: 3/6/2017 10:12:00 AM
It is these moments in time, those we can not predict that make life so interesting and fun. I could see this scene play out as I read this my friend.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/6/2017 11:49:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you!

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