One Mourning Dove

One Mourning Dove

At my kitchen table
On a cold and sunny day,
A gray dove spied and stared at me,
He took my mind away.

So still he sat outside my window,
Puffed fat against the cold,
Once I think I heard him mourn,
So still we stayed, he bold.

He ate my bread this morning,
Pigged the birds’ sunflower seeds,
Could he be telling me “Thank You?”
Or “Give me more, more, pretty please?”

My attention would stay upon that bird,
My book unread, the day waiting,
A dove studying me, I studying him,
Our way of communicating.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marie Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 1:16 AM
This is delightful...those moments when we see something that captivate us are amazing :-) My favorite line is "Puffed fat against the cold."! :-) Splendid writing, a joy to read. many blessings to you, lynn
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 9:04 PM
The little things make life so interesting, well done Sunlite...
Hoffman Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Great imagery in your lovely dove poem Sunlite; can imagine the whole scene~I'm guessing that the bird was asking for more seeds! Enjoyed!~Che :)
Rodd Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Puffed fat against the cold.. I saw your bird friend vividly in this poem !
Godwin Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:57 AM
This is different and delightful. A moment separate from time illustrated for readers to view. Beautifully served, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Hugs ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:35 AM
I went out with my daughter and filled the bird feeder...I love observing them in the morning
Wanter Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Thank you, Tim. I never get bored with watching them.
Chircop Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:04 AM
I can visualize this beauty.So loved this poem.
Wanter Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:48 AM
I so appreciate your comments!
Green Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 10:12 AM
It is these moments in time, those we can not predict that make life so interesting and fun. I could see this scene play out as I read this my friend.
Wanter Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 11:49 AM
Thank you! Thank you!
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