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the more they hate the more they weld the more were together the more we build funny how they tried breaking us they all lied but she stayed real every day i spend with her i want her more and that's the deal every time she is there for me she attends to my every need every day she watches my kids even though i did what i did not trying to bring up the past no more a new chapter we close that door shes so loyal shes got my back how could i hurt my kids like that im her paper shes my rock in that rock lies a precious stone everyday we talk on the phone i love your voice that precious tone just hang in there those haters will lie were here together to give it a try

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Date: 10/19/2010 12:09:00 AM
what a amazing poem sound like a unbreakable love...dont we all wish we had that
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:15:00 AM
yes i agree with the comment on the bottom if such girl like that exist they are rare... this as well is going in my favorites chezaray well i believe that you and this girl are being hated because you guys are the real deal one of a kind love that is impossible to break and those to are very rare please keep the poems going and keep us up to date letting us know that you two are still welding together....Fantastic work it truly touch my heart
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:01:00 PM
pleasantly stated, interesting, thank you,chuck
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:56:00 PM
Very nice creative and interesting write, chezaraj. enjoyed it
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Date: 10/4/2010 2:28:00 PM
a new chapter we close that door nice work..
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:39:00 PM
this is a really sweet and from the heart poem i love the line where it says.."im her paper shes my rock in that rock lies a precious stone" i also am adding this on my favorites....congrats very good work..
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:35:00 PM
amazing how how you wrote this poem if this girl really exist do not lose her because they are rare to find them like that these days...i truly love this poem it is def going on my favorites
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:50:00 PM
sweet and loving write, it's always beautiful to give life and love another try, cute write, enjoyed..P.D.
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