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One More Night

one more night buried again daylight saves me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 4/28/2011 6:14:00 AM
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Jimbo...very interesting... trusting in light...p.d.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/21/2011 10:15:00 AM
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good one Jimbo enter it! just no title..in title space put ---one more night [glad someone got the idea senryu is supposed to be witty ;)] Light & Love
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/20/2011 8:57:00 AM
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Sometimes our deepest thoughts come at night and daylight is the salvation. I like this poem for sometimes we want to bury the night and start fresh in the morning. Well said. God Bless Phyl
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/31/2011 3:44:00 PM
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short but sweet! the repetition becomes mind numbing [my life not your poem!]! Light & Love
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/27/2011 8:41:00 PM
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oooh, and this too wow, you are on a roll with these.
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Anthony Nutter
Date: 1/26/2011 6:27:00 PM
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The night does seem to bury, when we sleep we do die for a spell. Nice write Jimbo stirs a lot of thought.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/26/2011 5:10:00 PM
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Nice senryu with good humor, Jimbo,
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