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One Less Poppy 1918

Written in memory of a sweet young girl 1905-1918 R.I.P. Always. "One Less Poppy" Halfway my new destination, no smiles or happy faces, As I look back in sadness at my old home, the one I loved, Filled with happy memories, Dad on a Friday night Ruddy cheeked, swaying, handing over his week’s worth. His loving hugs and kisses the biggest treats of all. Mum radiant on a Sunday morning, hair black, shining Curled tumbling down, a flowing lilac dress, black patent buckled shoes, lips toffee apple-red. Her soft cheek offered as not to smudge her lipstick.. And how grand we all looked in our Sunday best. And the stories we told under the cover of darkness, Warmed by the glowing fire. Then I fell ill, the worried look on their faces, As everyone cared for me, I saw dad crying for the very first time, I cried too. He held my hand, kissed my brow, Told me I was his brave little girl. My brothers and sisters played in the Autumn mist, Oh! How I wished I was one of them, Without a care in the world, Then the November rain cried too. Finally my day arrived, I wore my favourite dress Which was blue, and white buckled shoes, And not a peep so well behaved, as I said goodbye To my friends and school. And as I watched the sadness it became clear That I would never see them again. I’m settled now, no chance to read or brush my hair, No kisses goodnight, no Autumn leaves, Or Christmas gifts, no hugs from dad , ice cream, Or Sunday mass. Eyes now closed, but forever good. Surrounded by my starless sky , a curtain of longing Sways around me, childish antics, lovingly told. Just shy of thirteen, the day before the great war And my world ended. I was taken by the Spanish flu. One less poppy to remember, One less Poppy in bloom.

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Date: 3/11/2024 12:39:00 AM
Dear Daniel, this is such a sad, very touching read but also captivating as the reader is drawn into the young girls plight. The title is so poignant. This elegy is so beautifully described through the eyes and heart of the young girl and her reflective thoughts as she bravely prepares for the inevitable. Heartbreaking! The final concluding lines as the curtain falls has a great impact. A wonderful, emotive write. Thank you for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup! :):)
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/11/2024 1:01:00 AM
Good Morning Christina , and thank you so much for your wonderful comments and thoughts , for me this was a really difficult poem to write as I had already written an earlier poem about her called A Petal Amongst the Thorns , I had stumbled upon her grave and was so heartbroken I wrote two poems in her memory , I researched her young life in the local paper archives and discovered she had arranged her own funeral and was happy to meet her God , her young life is the reason I started to write and to me she will always be my little poppy. Daniel
Date: 2/11/2024 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful first person elegy Daniel. Being a student of history I'm well familiar with this global pandemic you mention. Some estimates are over twenty million dead, more than twice those slaughtered during the war. I'm also a student of Bible prophecy and recognize the fulfillment of the signs presented by Jesus and their progression since 1914
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Date: 2/11/2024 11:44:00 PM
Good Morning Tom, it's so reassuring to read your comments , as this is my first time showing my work to others, the Spanish Flu was in so e ways worse than our recent pandemic as they had no medicines to deal with it . I too love history and I look forward to reading some of your work . Bible prophecy sounds very interesting . Once again thank you for taking the time to express your inspiraional comments .

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