One Last Thing

I think sometimes there is a word unsaid.

It’s lost and you swallow back the echoes of a mouth.

Choking under the swarm, as I sink lower.

As I’m pulled to the dregs.

As I see that above me. All around me.

Fading, pulsing, drowning.

Ghosts in the water with me.

Flecked as the waves.

Swarming smoothly, lapping at what remains.

Gliding, guiding, forcing me to remember.

All that has been given to me.

But slippery as the blue around me.

For really it is clear. All of it.

We think we can see. But we can’t.

Perception is a dangerous game.

What is there, never truly is.

I am sinking now. I am gasping.

My breath isn’t lasting.

They say it will race before you.

In those last moments.

Pressure is building. Ironically;

I’m freer than ever, but it’s weighing.

Weighing down, that’s what it does.

But I’m focusing on that one moment.

The small details. They count.

The droplets, not the ocean.

It’s a single tear.

I can feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
September 12, 2025 at 2:58 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Hey Lauren, One Last Thing I think it's different no average wording. That makes an excellent master piece of words.
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:37 AM
LAUREN, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
Harper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 3:11 PM
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Ray Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 6:46 PM
It's a lovely poem. It resonates. "Perception is a dangerous game", so true.
Hunjeri Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Sometimes its better not to say that last thing. Hugs njeri:)
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