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One In a Million

One in a million’s not enough To say what he meant to me. One from out of the whole wide world That is what the theme should be. He was my son, my only son, The first of my children three. I knew that I was truly blessed When God sent him down to me. He was born hungry so he cried For a bit those first few days, Until his mother understood The feeding schedule maze. Once his hunger was satisfied And he had begun to grow No sweeter child has ever lived Nor delightful one to know. His complexion would put to shame Any model’s of the day, His nature, that of an angel, Was his for a lifelong stay. He welcomed first little sister When he turned the age of two. No jealously did he display And he knew to be gentle too. He had pets and he treated them With great tenderness and care. If anyone or thing was hurting My son was the first one there. His elementary teacher said, When trouble brewed on school ground, My son found the way to fix it If a fair fix could be found. He had a very brilliant mind. He read books to make him think. If we had a knotty problem He’d be first to fix the kink. He gave measure for full measure And then gave just a bit more When dealing with his fellowman Whether they were rich or poor. He loved this world we all live in And could always find a way To find enjoyment in it. He made the best of every day. He brought me no pain or sorrow, But filled my heart with pride And happy to be his mother Until the sad day he died. God sent His angels down for him, Just before he turned fifty-six. He’d been born with a heart problem Even my bright son couldn’t fix. won 6th place in Linda marie's One in a Million contest. For One in a Million Contest

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Date: 11/15/2010 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:18:00 AM
Congratulation on your win with this moving poem, Joyce. I'm sure your son is smiling down on you from heaven. Blessings and love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congrats, Joyce. Outstanding tribute and entry. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:11:00 PM
Joyce...congrats on well deserved win ......... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/10/2010 8:57:00 PM
An absolutely touching and beautiful piece. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 11/10/2010 2:26:00 PM
Oh Joyce my heart is crying this is so sad but the years you had with him have filled your heart with his love.Congrats on your deserved 6th.place.Teresa
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Date: 11/10/2010 7:21:00 AM
Hi Joyce. Congratulations on your placing with this wonderful piece. What a beautiful piece for a loving son, gone but never forgotten. Eamon
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joyce
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Date: 11/10/2010 12:38:00 AM
Great tribute to your son, your poem expressed full enthusiasm to once again feel those happy moments with your son, but he is at peace now with our creator, I am sure he is smiling now because for him you are also a one in a million. Congratulations, Joyce on winning 6th place on Linda-Marie's contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:10:00 PM
A momm'a pride shows a bit in this one Joyce. But that is fine, isn't it? Congratulations on your poem's great honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Linda's Contest, Joyce! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:47:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your success in my One in a Million contest with this beautiful and touching ..sensitive and stirring write on your son.. enjoy and thankxxx for supporting always..with lvu..
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Date: 11/1/2010 11:55:00 AM
As your son is to you this poem also is one in a million dearest Joyce. This should win top spot. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 5:43:00 PM
so great a poem on your wonderful son... sorry for your loss!! May god grant you peace and comfort!
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Date: 10/31/2010 12:25:00 PM
Dear Joyce, I am so very sorry for the loss of your dear son's presence here with you. I imagine how you miss him so. I rejoice that he was himself, an "angel" and now his work is done, God has recalled his light unto Himself. You know that you will see him again, so take heart, dear Joyce..Much love to you this Sunday and always. Audrey
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Date: 10/31/2010 12:03:00 PM
I'm so sorry for your loss, Joyce..... though mutterings don't help. I wish you the best of luck in the contest with this heartfelt poem about your loss of a wonderful son. God bless!
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:42:00 AM
Dear, dear Joyce, I am so sorry your son died young. I can feel your pride as well as your pain in this incredible write. Indeed, he must have been one in a million to have inspired this poem. God bless you for bringing yourself to sharing this. I know it wasn't easy for you, but this is an outstanding entry for the contest and I'm sure your son would be proud of your work. A new favorite poem for me. Love and admiration, Carolyn
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Date: 10/31/2010 10:47:00 AM
Very touchy and emotional write on your dear son, Joyce
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