One Heart

I wonder our world should it beat with one heart The variance found would not tear us apart In words formed of love bid to meet each new day Together in one breath, we’d sweep hate away Intelligence summoned by thinking in tune Transforming the winter to springtime in June Inside of what looks like a shiny blue orb The water that flows through our lives would absorb Infirmities fashioned by weakness of mind To forge a new armor, our strengths well defined I wonder our world should it beat with one heart The tragedies requisite for us to start

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/1/2022 6:06:00 PM

Congratulations your win Mike! Linda

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/2/2022 6:09:00 AM

Thank you Linda!!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/30/2022 8:40:00 PM

"I wonder our world should it beat with one heart The tragedies requisite for us to start" - Beautiful reflection brought out using the I and T. Congratulations!

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/1/2022 5:25:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Christuraj!!

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/30/2022 2:53:00 PM

To beat with one heart, how sweet that would be. Congratulations on your win Mike Gentile!

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/1/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thank you so much Anaya!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2022 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work. Sara

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/1/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thank you very much Sara!!

Ann Peck

Date: 9/30/2022 10:27:00 AM

A lovely poem, Mike. We can always wish...Congratulations on your high placement!!

Mike Gentile
Date: 10/1/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thank you su much Ann !!

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/30/2022 9:31:00 AM

An emotive penning, Mike, an enlightenment that warrants consideration. Compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha William

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/30/2022 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much William!!! Happy Friday!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/14/2022 1:39:00 PM

This is so sweet. <3

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/19/2022 7:12:00 PM

Thanks so much BJ XXOO

Deb M

Date: 9/9/2022 9:05:00 PM

One heart of togetherness love and kindness …..harmony wouldn’t that be nice! Loved your thoughts Mike….Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2022 8:53:00 AM

Thanks so much Deb xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/30/2022 9:17:00 PM

A beautiful entry for the contest, Mike... I wonder though: If the world had but one heart, do you think it might go out of its 7.5 billion freaking minds?! ~ Hmm.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/31/2022 5:59:00 AM

Oh GW, but let me dream!! LOL! Happy Wednesday!!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/30/2022 4:56:00 PM

Oh, that this would be. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on harmony and unity with us through your poetry, Mike. A FAV for me, my friend. Nice rhyming and flow. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/30/2022 6:07:00 PM

Thanks Bill, I always appreciate your kind words!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/30/2022 6:22:00 AM

Wonderful sentiments you convey, Mike. Best to you.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/30/2022 6:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Vijay!!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/29/2022 7:15:00 PM

Mike , Such wonderful thoughts carried on the words of your heart . A collective embrace would be wonderful. Hugs to you , Susan :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/30/2022 5:33:00 AM

Hugs to you Susan!! Thank you so much for your kind words xxoo

Robert Gorelick

Date: 8/25/2022 6:03:00 PM

A wish for most of us everywhere, paradise on earth. A generous thought Mike, well written. Robert

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2022 6:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2022 5:00:00 PM

- There is a lot that needs to change before we can "forge a new armor" ... "one heart" ... a wonderful thought, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2022 6:51:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise xxoo

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/25/2022 5:28:00 AM

I wonder if such an existence could ever become reality, but I must believe it can if I have faith in God's plan for humans. Wonderful thought, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2022 6:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Jenna xxoo

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 8/24/2022 11:04:00 PM

Indeed, it is as you affirm, Mike. Unity Consciousness ~ Google ‘Ra law of one’, there are several YouTube videos on this too. Check out Aaron Abke. However right now the lesson mankind needs to learn is unconditional love before we shift to the next density

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2022 4:36:00 AM

I will check that out, thanks Unseeking Seeker!