Mike Gentile Poet Couplet

One Heart

I wonder our world should it beat with one heart
                   The variance found would not tear us apart
In words formed of love bid to meet each new day
              Together in one breath, we’d sweep hate away
Intelligence summoned by thinking in tune
                Transforming the winter to springtime in June

Inside of what looks like a shiny blue orb
     The water that flows through our lives would absorb
Infirmities fashioned by weakness of mind 
           To forge a new armor, our strengths well defined
I wonder our world should it beat with one heart
                          The tragedies requisite  for us to start

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Linda Alice Fowler October 1, 2022 at 6:06 PM Congratulations your win Mike! Linda Mike Gentile October 2, 2022 at 6:09 AM Thank you Linda!!

Christuraj Alex September 30, 2022 at 8:40 PM "I wonder our world should it beat with one heart The tragedies requisite for us to start" - Beautiful reflection brought out using the I and T. Congratulations! Mike Gentile October 1, 2022 at 5:25 AM Thank you for your kind comment Christuraj!!

I Am Anaya September 30, 2022 at 2:53 PM To beat with one heart, how sweet that would be. Congratulations on your win Mike Gentile! Mike Gentile October 1, 2022 at 5:24 AM Thank you so much Anaya!!

Sara Kendrick September 30, 2022 at 2:08 PM Congratulations on your winning work. Sara Mike Gentile October 1, 2022 at 5:24 AM Thank you very much Sara!!

Ann Peck September 30, 2022 at 10:27 AM A lovely poem, Mike. We can always wish...Congratulations on your high placement!! Mike Gentile October 1, 2022 at 5:24 AM Thank you su much Ann !!

William Kelii Kekaula September 30, 2022 at 9:31 AM An emotive penning, Mike, an enlightenment that warrants consideration. Compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha William Mike Gentile September 30, 2022 at 10:01 AM Thank you so much William!!! Happy Friday!

Bj Legros Kelley September 14, 2022 at 1:39 PM This is so sweet. <3 Mike Gentile September 19, 2022 at 7:12 PM Thanks so much BJ XXOO

Deb M September 9, 2022 at 9:05 PM One heart of togetherness love and kindness …..harmony wouldn’t that be nice! Loved your thoughts Mike….Debx Mike Gentile September 12, 2022 at 8:53 AM Thanks so much Deb xxoo

Gershon Wolf August 30, 2022 at 9:17 PM A beautiful entry for the contest, Mike... I wonder though: If the world had but one heart, do you think it might go out of its 7.5 billion freaking minds?! ~ Hmm. Mike Gentile August 31, 2022 at 5:59 AM Oh GW, but let me dream!! LOL! Happy Wednesday!!

Bill Baker August 30, 2022 at 4:56 PM Oh, that this would be. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on harmony and unity with us through your poetry, Mike. A FAV for me, my friend. Nice rhyming and flow. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Mike Gentile August 30, 2022 at 6:07 PM Thanks Bill, I always appreciate your kind words!!

Vijay Pandit August 30, 2022 at 6:22 AM Wonderful sentiments you convey, Mike. Best to you. Mike Gentile August 30, 2022 at 6:07 PM Thanks so much Vijay!!

Susan Lawrence August 29, 2022 at 7:15 PM Mike , Such wonderful thoughts carried on the words of your heart . A collective embrace would be wonderful. Hugs to you , Susan :) Mike Gentile August 30, 2022 at 5:33 AM Hugs to you Susan!! Thank you so much for your kind words xxoo

Robert Gorelick August 25, 2022 at 6:03 PM A wish for most of us everywhere, paradise on earth. A generous thought Mike, well written. Robert Mike Gentile August 25, 2022 at 6:51 PM Thanks so much Robert!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2022 at 5:00 PM - There is a lot that needs to change before we can "forge a new armor" ... "one heart" ... a wonderful thought, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mike Gentile August 25, 2022 at 6:51 PM Thank you Anne-Lise xxoo

Jenna Logan August 25, 2022 at 5:28 AM I wonder if such an existence could ever become reality, but I must believe it can if I have faith in God's plan for humans. Wonderful thought, Mike. Mike Gentile August 25, 2022 at 6:51 PM Thanks so much Jenna xxoo

Unseeking Seeker August 24, 2022 at 11:04 PM Indeed, it is as you affirm, Mike. Unity Consciousness ~ Google ‘Ra law of one’, there are several YouTube videos on this too. Check out Aaron Abke. However right now the lesson mankind needs to learn is unconditional love before we shift to the next density Mike Gentile August 25, 2022 at 4:36 AM I will check that out, thanks Unseeking Seeker!

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2022 at 3:54 PM so interesting. What questions you pose!! Mike Gentile August 25, 2022 at 4:36 AM Thanks so much Andrea!!

Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2022 at 3:54 PM or rather "wonderings" Mike Gentile August 25, 2022 at 4:37 AM Thanks

Charles Messina August 24, 2022 at 2:52 AM Such a fine write, Mike. Love this piece. One heart!!! Charlie Mike Gentile August 24, 2022 at 3:06 AM Thanks so much Charlie!!