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Posie
I don't know who invented it?
Rhyme pattern (looks good centered, but that is optional)
(01)- a- 8 syllables - (02)- b- 8 syllables (03)- a- 8 syllables (04)- b- 8 syllables (05)- c- 4 syllables (06)- c- 4 syllables (07)- a- 8 syllables (08)- b- 8 syllables (09)- a- 8 syllables (10)- b- 8 syllables (11)- d- 4 syllables (12)- d- 4 syllables





I saw some concern on your face
as you climbed into bed last night.
And I felt your heart start to race
when you snuggled up, extra tight.
You seem madder,
what's the matter?

You found one grey hair out of place
which you angrily plucked from sight.
And you fear time's increased its pace,
yet though you're worried, it's alright.
I love your grey
let them all stay.



(Posie)

Written Feb.14, 2018 For Rhyme Me A Posie - Poetry Contest 
By: Broken Wings

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Olive Lane

Date: 3/14/2018 11:42:00 AM

I love it! I remember my first gray hair and how morbid it seemed!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 2:06:00 PM

Thanks Olive, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/13/2018 3:12:00 AM

Awwww this is so sweet Emile. Wish every man felt that way. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/12/2018 10:59:00 AM

Very sweet, Emile, and what every graying woman would love to hear! Well done, and congrats on your win. Sandra

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 8:53:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

Date: 3/12/2018 8:15:00 AM

Emile congratulations on your win in my contest with this sweet poem

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/12/2018 8:25:00 AM

Thanks Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/12/2018 1:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Emile on your win.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/12/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Subimal, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/11/2018 7:45:00 PM

Back with congrats on this sweet poem, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2018 8:01:00 PM

Thanks line, as always you make my day, Emile.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/10/2018 1:42:00 AM

Love it, so human was the concern and the comforting that it was like a private moment I glimpsed thru a poetry window. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/10/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

barbara barry-nishanian

Date: 2/18/2018 4:20:00 PM

Posie..Thanks, for education. Time increases pace, so true. Appreciate you wrote about life in simple reality. I enjoy reading these and is my style to write. bbn

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/19/2018 8:32:00 AM

Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/16/2018 5:58:00 PM

Precious!

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/16/2018 6:33:00 PM

Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/15/2018 9:43:00 AM

A beautiful write ... Enjoyed reading it ...

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/15/2018 11:41:00 AM

Thanks Probir, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

JAN ALLISON

Date: 2/14/2018 4:58:00 PM

aww Emile such a touching loving ending to your poem I am charmed by your words:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2018 5:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan, your comments never fail to bring a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/14/2018 4:42:00 PM

Very sweet, Emile. Big points for you from wife and fellow poets.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2018 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Line, I hear you are from Canada as well...where about?I always appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Kevin Shaw

Date: 2/14/2018 4:24:00 PM

Good luck in the contest from a Man with lots of Grey hairs, regards, Kevin

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2018 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Keven, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2018 3:09:00 PM

Hi Emile, Now what "love" is all about. As we age sometimes we reassurance that we are still loved by our mate. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2018 4:50:00 PM

Thanks so much Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Maureen McGreavy

Date: 2/14/2018 2:56:00 PM

I love it Emile :) my best to you in the contest! xomo

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2018 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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One Grey Hair