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Posie
I don't know who invented it?
Rhyme pattern (looks good centered, but that is optional)
(01)- a- 8 syllables - (02)- b- 8 syllables  (03)- a- 8 syllables  (04)- b- 8 syllables (05)- c- 4 syllables (06)- c- 4 syllables (07)- a- 8 syllables (08)- b- 8 syllables  (09)- a- 8 syllables (10)- b- 8 syllables (11)- d- 4 syllables (12)- d- 4 syllables

 





I saw some concern on your face as you climbed into bed last night. And I felt your heart start to race when you snuggled up, extra tight. You seem madder, what's the matter? You found one grey hair out of place which you angrily plucked from sight. And you fear time's increased its pace, yet though you're worried, it's alright. I love your grey let them all stay. (Posie) Written Feb.14, 2018 For Rhyme Me A Posie - Poetry Contest By: Broken Wings

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Date: 3/14/2018 11:42:00 AM
I love it! I remember my first gray hair and how morbid it seemed!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Olive, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/13/2018 3:12:00 AM
Awwww this is so sweet Emile. Wish every man felt that way. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 3/13/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2018 10:59:00 AM
Very sweet, Emile, and what every graying woman would love to hear! Well done, and congrats on your win. Sandra
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Date: 3/13/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2018 8:15:00 AM
Emile congratulations on your win in my contest with this sweet poem
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Date: 3/12/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/12/2018 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Emile on your win.
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Date: 3/12/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/11/2018 7:45:00 PM
Back with congrats on this sweet poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/11/2018 8:01:00 PM
Thanks line, as always you make my day, Emile.
Date: 3/10/2018 1:42:00 AM
Love it, so human was the concern and the comforting that it was like a private moment I glimpsed thru a poetry window. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/10/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/18/2018 4:20:00 PM
Posie..Thanks, for education. Time increases pace, so true. Appreciate you wrote about life in simple reality. I enjoy reading these and is my style to write. bbn
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/19/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/16/2018 5:58:00 PM
Precious!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/16/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/15/2018 9:43:00 AM
A beautiful write ... Enjoyed reading it ...
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Date: 2/15/2018 11:41:00 AM
Thanks Probir, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2018 4:58:00 PM
aww Emile such a touching loving ending to your poem I am charmed by your words:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2018 5:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan, your comments never fail to bring a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2018 4:42:00 PM
Very sweet, Emile. Big points for you from wife and fellow poets.
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Line, I hear you are from Canada as well...where about?I always appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2018 4:24:00 PM
Good luck in the contest from a Man with lots of Grey hairs, regards, Kevin
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:50:00 PM
Thanks Keven, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2018 3:09:00 PM
Hi Emile, Now what "love" is all about. As we age sometimes we reassurance that we are still loved by our mate. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/14/2018 2:56:00 PM
I love it Emile :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:49:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.