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One Grey Hair

I saw the concern on your face
as you climbed into bed last night.
And I felt your tensive embrace
when you snuggled up extra tight.
You seem sadder;
what's the matter?

You found one grey hair out of place,
which you silently plucked from sight.
You feel time's increasing its pace;
but don't be worried; it's alright.
I love your grey;
let them all stay!

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Sam Kauffman Date: 3/20/2023 1:52:00 PM What a tender, sweet and romantic poem Emile that is born from a lover's compassionate, caring heart. Wonderfully done. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/20/2023 2:34:00 PM Thanks, Sam, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Olive Lane Date: 3/14/2018 11:42:00 AM I love it! I remember my first gray hair and how morbid it seemed! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/14/2018 2:06:00 PM Thanks Olive, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/13/2018 3:12:00 AM Awwww this is so sweet Emile. Wish every man felt that way. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/13/2018 8:54:00 AM Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Sandra Haight Date: 3/12/2018 10:59:00 AM Very sweet, Emile, and what every graying woman would love to hear! Well done, and congrats on your win. Sandra Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/13/2018 8:53:00 AM Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Constance La France Date: 3/12/2018 8:15:00 AM Emile congratulations on your win in my contest with this sweet poem Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/12/2018 8:25:00 AM Thanks Constance, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 3/12/2018 1:26:00 AM Congratulations, Emile on your win. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/12/2018 8:24:00 AM Thanks Subimal, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier Date: 3/11/2018 7:45:00 PM Back with congrats on this sweet poem, Emile. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/11/2018 8:01:00 PM Thanks line, as always you make my day, Emile.

CayCay Jennings Date: 3/10/2018 1:42:00 AM Love it, so human was the concern and the comforting that it was like a private moment I glimpsed thru a poetry window. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/10/2018 7:56:00 AM Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian Date: 2/18/2018 4:20:00 PM Posie..Thanks, for education. Time increases pace, so true. Appreciate you wrote about life in simple reality. I enjoy reading these and is my style to write. bbn Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/19/2018 8:32:00 AM Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Sunlite Wanter Date: 2/16/2018 5:58:00 PM Precious! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/16/2018 6:33:00 PM Thanks Sunlite, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Probir Gupta Date: 2/15/2018 9:43:00 AM A beautiful write ... Enjoyed reading it ... Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/15/2018 11:41:00 AM Thanks Probir, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison Date: 2/14/2018 4:58:00 PM aww Emile such a touching loving ending to your poem I am charmed by your words:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/14/2018 5:13:00 PM Thank you so much Jan, your comments never fail to bring a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier Date: 2/14/2018 4:42:00 PM Very sweet, Emile. Big points for you from wife and fellow poets. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/14/2018 4:51:00 PM Thanks Line, I hear you are from Canada as well...where about?I always appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Kevin Shaw Date: 2/14/2018 4:24:00 PM Good luck in the contest from a Man with lots of Grey hairs, regards, Kevin Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/14/2018 4:50:00 PM Thanks Keven, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y. Date: 2/14/2018 3:09:00 PM Hi Emile, Now what "love" is all about. As we age sometimes we reassurance that we are still loved by our mate. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/14/2018 4:50:00 PM Thanks so much Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 2/14/2018 2:56:00 PM I love it Emile :) my best to you in the contest! xomo Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 2/14/2018 4:49:00 PM Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.