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One Glass Too Many

One two go to the loo, Three-four fall on the floor Five-six feeling quite sick Seven-eight can't stand up straight Nine-ten I've done it again Eleven-twelve put wine on the shelve Thirteen-fourteen, I find this daunting Fifteen-sixteen that shelf needs fixing Seventeen-eighteen bottles still waiting Nineteen twenty my glass is empty.

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Date: 3/18/2022 1:53:00 AM
What a clever parody!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 3/19/2022 11:53:00 PM
My muse wasn't feeling well I think he was drunk. Thank you, Caren
Date: 3/11/2022 11:00:00 AM
Happy weak end! Aloha!
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 3/11/2022 4:37:00 PM
G'day Rico, No whine bottle or shelf.
Date: 3/11/2022 4:29:00 AM
Love this Shirley…hope this is not you on a Saturday night hehe !!! Debx
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 3/11/2022 4:46:00 PM
I could not think of anything to write about it is my version of an old nursery rhyme. Desperation. Have a good week- end, Deb

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