One For the Road

This evening hurts
I've grown rusty
quick wits groan
as curtains hide footlight
that makes its way 
to stage 

That voice - is it mine? -
grumpy, in need of... what....
and the audience standing around
stares confused...
fake popcorn smiles 
in hot buttered nervousness

Wish they would give me one
to ease into fog
make them all go away

Wish I could play my violin
so no one would hear my
smoky rasp in the microphone

I burn up concessions
create wistful sunsets
at the very break of day

Fix me a strong one
for tonight and

one stronger for the morning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Wow! Feelings worn on the sleeve...a poet writes!
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:03 AM
What a performance! Bravo! Encore, poet! ~ Gershon
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 11:03 AM
What a performance! Bravo! Encore, poet! ~ Gershon
Green Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 8:39 AM
This was really cool my friend. I especially liked the second stanza. You have outdone yourself here. This feels different from what I am used to from you and I like it a lot.
Neumann Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 2:05 AM
Wow Darren, I hope the strong one is not for real. This is a beautiful write. I hope you are well. Best wishes, Kai
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Moody and wistful, I like it. Big hugs Sweet P. "That voice - is it mine? -" ...stirring dear poet. xomo
Smith Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 7:54 AM
I prefer the grumpy smokey feel...liked this Darren
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