One Falcon Feather

Pain had damaged her wings
in her seemingly endless struggles
beating them against the valley walls,
then, in the last days she made haste 
and climbed to the mountain’s summit
and flew free.

At first I could not see
that the sun and the moon 
were shining on that verdant floor
where she lay still 
till her soul opened its wings and ascended to live 
far above the clouds.

That bird of her soul encompassed the earth
casting no shadows
in all the six directions, and as I watched her ascent
one falcon feather like a sycamore seed
spiralled down and became entangled 
in my hair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hendricks Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Beautiful, Tom. I love the gentle flow of this write. How have I missed you before? :)
Mcferran Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 12:57 PM
You didn't miss me . . . I've only very recently joined. Tom.x.
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