One December Night

One December Night

     Susan, Joy, Marsha, and Pam crawled out of their beds to eat bacon and ham.
Their parents were sleeping.  They snored while the slept.  The children tiptoed to the very 
top step.  The staircase was chilly.  And it creaked while they crept.  Downward they were 
slinking, step by step.  
     Their puppy was resting on the fireplace hearth.  They sat down beside him for what it 
was worth.  They sat on the floor.  They did not use a chair.  And while they were sitting, 
Marsha hugged her pink bear.  They made funny faces and started to laugh.  They giggled 
and squiggled and chuckled so fast that all of the elves in earshot were aghast.   
     Then all of a sudden, they heard something loud.  It wasn't a trumpet, a flute or 
bassoon.  “I know what it is!  …A kazoo!!” shouted Sue.  
     They looked all around to locate the sound.  But, look as they might, it could not be 
found.  They looked in the kitchen and under the couch.  Pam bumped her red head and 
loudly said, “Ouch!”  Who played that kazoo?  They all wanted to know.  So, they scampered 
around by the fireplace glow.
     The dog started barking.  And bark loudly he did.  That's when it happened.  Beneath the 
windowsill Sue slid.  A great big toad outside, on that hill, in the cold wet snow, stood up 
suddenly.  Then, quickly down he did go.  Frightened, freezing, and carrying a load.  He slid 
off of the log and went a-rolling downhill in the snow.
    The children began jumping and squealing with delight.  Oh, what a sight to see at mid-
night.  The old toad was sliding with stocking feet in the air.  Behind him, downhill, slid his 
sack with a flare.  About all that sliding he did not seem to care.  Out there on the lawn in 
rare southern snow, up and down Roller Coaster hill he did go!  Faster and faster, he was 
sliding with time.  His suit became wet and covered with grime.  Where was he going?  Who 
would they tell?  At about that time, they heard the doorbell.   
                   (To be continued...)

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
December 5, 2009

Inspired by:
Poetrysoup member's Contest Anything Goes! 	
Sponsored by: Constance La France  (I took you at your word... It's a LONG story.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/11/2010 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Dane Ann. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:02:00 AM
Magical journey...I do hope you will write the conclusion. This would make for a wonderful Children's book. Congratulations on your win Dane Ann. You are a very gifted writer. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/6/2009 10:36:00 AM
The beginnings of a WINNER, I believe! Good job Dane Ann! Thank you so much for your kind comments on my poem. Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/6/2009 5:40:00 AM
Lovely warm story unfolding here Dane Ann >> James
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Date: 12/5/2009 10:00:00 PM
I wonder where Mr. Toad is headed, Dane Ann. This would make a great story for children to read. More to come I see...
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Date: 12/5/2009 7:58:00 PM
I am intrigued so far ...onto next part...
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