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One Day Without You

It’s been one day without you and I wish my heart stopped beating when yours did. Sad One Liner Silent One October 11, 2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/14/2016 8:32:00 AM

Very emotional..... Congrats Laura, for having your line highly placed in the contest!! ;-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/13/2016 6:33:00 PM

Hi Laura, You have penned such a sad heartfelt write.The love that you have for Bo is evident in this one liner. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Moon Flower

Date: 10/13/2016 4:08:00 AM

Congrats on your win! ;)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/13/2016 2:03:00 AM

Very deep and heartfelt, Laura:) Congratulations:) I did not even see this contest come up:(

Janis Thompson

Date: 10/12/2016 2:51:00 PM

Wow, I have never loved that much. Intense. Congratulations.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/12/2016 1:26:00 PM

A 7 for this beautiful, poignant, WINNING entry, Luloo! Janice

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/12/2016 12:53:00 PM

Congrats Laura to win top position.Hugs.

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 10/12/2016 12:47:00 PM

Pass the tissues - that's surely a heart breaking winner!

Augustus Black

Date: 10/12/2016 12:16:00 PM

Oh, wow.. This miraculous write just stopped my heart for a while. I can't describe its beauty. Congratulation for top place.

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 10/12/2016 11:49:00 AM

Congrats on placement but sorry to learn the grief is real. Its real fun to participate in one liners but I missed this one

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/12/2016 11:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/12/2016 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations LuLoo, well done...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/11/2016 5:25:00 PM

Heartbreaking :( I hope it is fictional.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/12/2016 7:06:00 AM

Oh luloo, I am so sorry about your pet.

Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2016 8:44:00 PM

thanks Agnes- no it's real I put my sweet fur-baby to rest yesterday...:)-luloo

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/11/2016 12:54:00 PM

Oh no Laura! I hope this is fiction but I suspect it is not...This hit me like a lightning bolt. I see a true winner here...

Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2016 8:43:00 PM

thanks Tim, no it's true I put my sweet doggie BO to rest yesterday and having a rough time.... :)-luloo

Frederic Parker

Date: 10/11/2016 11:09:00 AM

The emptiness of loss is a moment of clarity seen through the eyes of loneliness

Lu Loo
Date: 10/11/2016 8:42:00 PM

very wise Frederic...thanks :)-luloo