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As seagulls dipped, I saw a girl
her name I cannot breath nor slur,
It is extremely rare that I write any poem about my very own personal life, but this one is a true story and an exception, the above lines say, though no reader would ever guess unless they knew, her first name was the very same name as the girl the poem is about. She knows.
Strangely, and tragically, the second girl who is the girl in these 2 lines, was from Doylestown, Pennsylvania, and to this ver4y day, she is "braindead" and all she does is look out windows.Every time I go to the beach, expecially in Hollywood Beach, I protest very actively to have them ban the use of any motorized/wheeled vehicle on the beach, because it happens frequently on nearly every beach.
Ronnie