Get Your Premium Membership

One Contingency

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Emile Pinet.


In the arctic tundra live strange critters called lemming that, legend says, jump off cliffs. Their fate's enough to give one the jitters, imagine finding all those frozen stiffs. When overcrowding becomes an issue, it's rumored that they all stampede to the sea. And throw themselves in, but hold the tissue, that enduring myth isn't true, you see. Misconceptions about this small furball are based on its runs when they get too dense. Their numbers grow when food is a windfall, then run off when shortages grow intense. Madness isn't a part of Nature's plan, that's one contingency; She leaves to Man. (Sonnet) 10/14/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/7/2017 9:09:00 PM
Oh well done! Congratulations Emile :) xomo!
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 12/8/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Maureen, I appreciate your congratulations and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/7/2017 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Emile, the picture is shocking.. hugs eve
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 12/8/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/7/2017 3:15:00 PM
First, a well earned congratulations on winning the contest. Second, the Lemming myth is not that far from the truth, based on mass migration in times of population explosions. Their movements were to the east and west. And as we now know the east split from the west (in more ways than one) but instinct drove the lemmings on, nothing to do with mass suicide. My experience was to find them dead, scattered over vast areas of woodland in Norway, and not to far from its west coast. (Mid 60's).
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 12/8/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Mick, I appreciate your detailed comments and support my friend, Emile.
Talbot Avatar
Mick Talbot
Date: 12/7/2017 3:20:00 PM
(ran out of charter space, lol, more needed, ) Make of that what you will, maybe I to should have extended my visit to the coast, mmm? Best seasonal wishes... Mick
Date: 12/7/2017 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations. I liked the turn in your poem leading to the ironic ending (common man's misconception of nature used to point out the madness of man). No forced rhymes. These days it is hard to comprehend the madness of our headlines. God must like the fabled Lemmings because he sure makes a lot of them. Again congratulations!
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 12/7/2017 1:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Michael, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/14/2017 9:24:00 PM
Nice poem Emile, so true!
Login to Reply
Pinet Avatar
Emile Pinet
Date: 12/7/2017 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things