Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Free verse

One Autumn Night

Sky turns red as the sun sets on an Autumn evening
Night comes bringing in a slight chill
I see the ruddy moon leaning over a hedge
Like a red-faced farmer
Crisp fall air sets the night
Changed-color leaves' song roars
Round about are the wistful stars.

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September 6, 2014
Form: Free Verse
Dr. Ram mehta
Tenth Place win
Contest: One Autumn Night by P.D.

My Inspiration is picture No.3

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Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2014 at 12:15 AM oh I love that part, the ruddy moon likened to a red faced farmer. Awesome!!

Joseph May December 28, 2014 at 9:42 AM Congrats on a fine win Dr Ram

Pandita Sietesantos December 27, 2014 at 4:16 PM Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on another well-deserved win! I love the amazing imagery! Warmest regards. Pandita.

Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 1:12 PM absolutely beautiful - many congrats:-) hugs Jan x

Robert Stoner Jr December 27, 2014 at 12:08 PM congratulations Dr. M on another win much deserved

Edward Ebbs December 27, 2014 at 11:20 AM Congrats, Dr. I love Autumn's crisp air :)

Poet Destroyer A December 27, 2014 at 10:06 AM DR RAM, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA

Elaine George September 9, 2014 at 10:31 AM Absolutely beautiful. Sure to top the winners list, my friend. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2014 at 12:22 PM Dr. Ram, this has got to be one of the most amazing poems I have seen from you for descriptive writing of a nature scene. Wow, I love it!! the red faced farmer, what a great line too.

Mohammad Taha Effendi September 6, 2014 at 10:35 PM Your use of metaphors makes this one special. Most of what i write reflects death and decay but through poets such as you, I have realized that there is so much beauty in poetry and in nature! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem winning "Any 5 line Poem" by Poet Destroyer.

Keith Merritt September 6, 2014 at 10:34 PM The leaves are turning red already where I sit. In a month it will be as you describe ! A win is in your future, Doctor ! Thanks for the prescription...I feel better already.

Pandita Sietesantos September 6, 2014 at 10:37 AM This Autumn Night is filled with beautiful imagery! This definitely a winner! Pandita

Casarah Nance September 6, 2014 at 9:31 AM Pretty :) I like it, best of luck honey

Sara Kendrick September 6, 2014 at 6:28 AM Ahhh!! We are not quite there yet..It is still hot here..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara