Get Your Premium Membership

One Autumn Day

As a shape shifter I change into a bird and fly high above the sunlight forest. The trees now losing their leaves show me the patches in between what was once hidden. Glimpses of lake and stream glittering and gleaming and the multitude of dazzling Autumn colours, give a sense of peace and memories of long gone Summer. 09/10/2014 contest: One Autumn Day sponsor PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/10/2014 11:30:00 PM
I Love how you made yourself into a shape shifter!! It would have been nice if we could have taken this to more than seven lines. No telling what you would have shifted into next!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2014 10:57:00 AM
Wow that's beautiful shadow! Love ur expressions on autumn here ! Gl in contest!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2014 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful personification of an autumn day, Shadow.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2014 9:07:00 AM
Autumn is my favorite time of year- the "multitude of dazzling colours" I am so looking forward to it. lovely poem. :-)
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things