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One-Way Ticket

Homeward bound, I had a one-way ticket, Pleased; it was stashed safely in my pocket. Showed it at the counter, “Wrong route”, said the teller. I should be at home to fly this ticket!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2014 8:05:00 PM

anytime

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:52:00 PM

Hija, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/1/2014 6:12:00 AM

Thanks, Linda :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/27/2014 10:13:00 AM

Grats on your win :) :)

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/27/2014 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, Casarah! :)

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/27/2014 9:08:00 AM

Oops! Well done! Congratulations on your placement!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/27/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, Roy! Congrats on your top win! :))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2014 8:37:00 AM

Very witty write hija ! Congrats on fine win!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/27/2014 10:30:00 AM

Thanks for the nice words, Dr. Upma :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/27/2014 1:02:00 AM

Amusing and funny piece, luna. congrats

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/27/2014 10:31:00 AM

Am glad you find it funny-amusing, Dr. Ram!. Congratulations, too! :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/26/2014 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations on this win. Love, Joyce

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/26/2014 11:56:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Joyce! Nice of you to drop by, too! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2014 1:57:00 PM

How cute. Congrats on your win!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/26/2014 11:56:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! Your congratulations means a lot :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2014 1:42:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/26/2014 11:57:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!!! :))

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/26/2014 11:53:00 AM

Loved the irony in this poem! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Carolyn

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/26/2014 11:59:00 PM

Thanks a lot for sponsoring this contest and appreciating my piece, Carolyn. I hope you had a grand vacation! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 4:53:00 PM

Hija, :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/26/2014 11:59:00 PM

Nice to know you are back, Linda. Thanks for dropping by :))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2014 1:00:00 AM

Hija, Ha I love what you did here. Far away rhymes work for me all the time. Counter & Teller, enjoyed the limerick... Linda

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/14/2014 2:51:00 AM

Thanks for enjoying the limerick and the nice comment, Linda :))

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/13/2014 5:48:00 PM

Good beginning... Some work on the rhyme needed, I think. Cheers, Roy

Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/13/2014 7:06:00 PM

thanks for the nice words, roy :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2014 9:12:00 AM

- Great one .... !!! :))) - Like it !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)