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One-Liner: Where I Live

Seattle, Washington Green needle casted space cascade ever emerald volcanic mountains.

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Darren White

Date: 10/7/2016 10:41:00 AM

Beau-ti-ful. For this line alone I'd like to see Seattle :)

Ironic Zink
Date: 10/7/2016 11:26:00 PM

I may recommend you slot in time to visit the Olympic National Park... In Seattle, you can see the Olympic mountains to the west (across the Pudget Sound) and the Cascades to the east and of course the 15,000ish ft Mt. Rainer from practically sea level making it simply massive from the right spots. Lots of fun at Seattle Center where the space needle is located and with its 360 degree view you will see it all crystal clear. A must do, which even I haven't done; so I plan too soon.

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/6/2016 11:03:00 AM

LOVELY POEM, enjoyed! hearty congrats on the great win I.Z:)// love, Anu:)

Ironic Zink
Date: 10/6/2016 11:28:00 AM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2016 9:53:00 PM

this is lovely. I visited in '69 I think shortly after the needle was put up. My dad lives in Olympia!

Ironic Zink
Date: 10/6/2016 12:23:00 AM

I wonder what it was like when Jimmy Hendrix was still alive? I'm sure that's a timeless memory Andrea. Thank you for sharing.