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One, and Only One Wish

My name is Frankie and I am a fish Who can grant you one, and only one wish A water-based genie, with a tail that goes swish Tell me your dreams; I'll serve them up on a dish Pleasant as a porpoise, peaceful as a dove I enjoy what I do; my work you will love When you reach for the moon, I'll give you a star Dream up an ocean; get a submarine with a bar Now I'm not a land genie; I won't live forever So my personal wish before my time's severed Is to be grilled to perfection when I'm through And served with a garnish, to delight all of you

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Date: 1/20/2019 5:53:00 AM
Ahhh!! So you are a fish genie come to live as a human for awhile but isn't that what some theory is about how humans became humans? Enjoyed reading your creative work. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/20/2019 8:36:00 AM
Appreciate the comment, and glad you enjoyed this. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 1/17/2019 10:09:00 PM
I like it all but this part called to my heart the heaviest: "When you reach for the moon, I'll give you a star Dream up an ocean; get a submarine with a bar". So jazzy and fun!
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Date: 1/17/2019 10:27:00 PM
Alright! Glad to read that it worked/works for you, Caren. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 1/17/2019 2:41:00 PM
Gershon, this was great!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/17/2019 10:27:00 PM
Bobby, glad you liked it. Appreciate your feedback. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 1/17/2019 2:05:00 PM
Genie-ous! :-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/17/2019 10:26:00 PM
---Not nearly so much as your clever comment! Thanks, Ed. ~ Gershon

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