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Once upon a Winter Go-Go

Plastic go-go Yellow snow, O! Iceman cometh Hummingbird hummeth Frostbite itch Rapid eye twitch 31 Flavors Winter, Savor ~ Really, this is a 'footle-like' couplet -- aka 'a fertile couplet.' lol. ~ gw

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/12/2025 7:20:00 AM

Perfect rhyme and rhythm. I envision a western barn dance and a fiddle.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/12/2025 6:59:00 AM

sent you a Soup Mail

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/12/2025 1:22:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon, thank you, thank you for making me laugh aloud. I adore this (still laughing while I type.) I completely lost it at, "Hummingbird hummeth" but giggles smoothed out until 'a fertile couplet'. I don't know what Winter Go-Go means, is that just my brain? I always wonder that when I don't understand something in a poem that other commenters obviously do. Oh, well, I gotta be me. There are times when I adore you ... CayCay (yes, this is such a time.)