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Once Upon a Tomorrow

When birds mass in ebony flight, and skim brightness from the sun, light shall not flee your eyes. When laughter fades from the languages of men, and ears have forgotten song, I shall hear your voice. When nothing can be embraced but the bones of fire, and mouths are icicled, the warmth of your body shall still flicker in mine. If ever the tides are too tired to reach shore, and sleep is heaped upon the seas, you shall flow through me. Boughs may flare naked like broken veins, and dead leaves flood every road, but once upon a tomorrow, my way back to you I shall find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2018 8:41:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery, a love poem at its finest!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/8/2018 2:07:00 AM
Thanks a million, Caren! Really glad you liked it.
Date: 5/5/2018 9:53:00 AM
Fantastic imagery! Really Classic poetry. Love it!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/5/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Joe. Appreciated.
Date: 4/13/2018 7:45:00 PM
Wow! Absolutely spell bound poetry with vivid imagery. Actually ur poetry is a vivid example of beauty. Poem makes us laugh, cry, prickle, silent.So did this on. Review Pari Style Poem to encourage me.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/28/2018 12:06:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/5/2018 12:21:00 PM
Hello Bernard, you have created a beautiful poem.I like the three verses of your poem.Have a nice day my friend. Don't stay away too long.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 3/6/2018 10:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Darlene :)
Date: 2/17/2018 11:09:00 AM
Your words run so delicately with sweet tenderness and seemingly extreme admiration. But nowhere is there a feel of melodrama or false emotion - a challenge taken up and won! Was/am truly touched by your second stanza, it's breathtaking. Hope life treats you gently.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/18/2018 4:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot for dropping by, Emma. Your kind words are appreciated.
Date: 2/15/2018 8:18:00 AM
Awesome poem, Bernard. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Best wishes.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/16/2018 4:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/15/2018 3:51:00 AM
Great poem, great message. Good luck with your mundane matters and hopefully the soup will soon welcome you back. Kai
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/15/2018 7:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kai. I'll definitely be back, hopefully sooner than expected. Appreciate your generous words.
Date: 2/11/2018 9:48:00 AM
Wow! Bernard, your imagery and imagination are magical and meaningful. Such beauty and tenderness shine in your exquisite words. Each stanza is elegantly expressive, but your first and fourth especially, resonated with me most strongly.. A gorgeous write. See you soon my friend. Warmest wishes always. ~Susan
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/11/2018 9:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! I'll be back soon. Talk to you again then :))
Date: 2/5/2018 6:10:00 PM
I love the imagery in your poem, Bernard. Fave! Don't stay away too long!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/5/2018 7:28:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Agnes! Appreciate it. Catch up with you when I'm back!
Date: 2/5/2018 6:59:00 AM
An awesome creation...you imagination shines with your words..hope to see you soon in this space, Bernard.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 2/5/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Vijay! Yes, I'll be back, that's for sure. See you again soon!

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