Once Upon a Time Lived I

To nature's norms have I complied - I laughed, I cried, I lived. I tried. I'd like to think in aftermath There's more to my existence path. I paid the procreation dues, Dear offspring and their offspring too. My children opened up my eyes Far beyond me, myself and I. The grandkids taught me quite a bit - There's more to golden age than knit. No shutters to wondering mind, Just open it and you will find - In brighter hue the greener grass Is on our side in front of us. Power is not how much but how To stay aboard the flight of now. Retired bliss converts the course - Discretionary time to pause. Smelling the roses is a must As flower fanfare fading fast. Hunger for knowledge, free to sate, But wisdom's pride is heavyweight. (No known tip-off to neutralize - To shed the weights and keep the wise). The all time norm by which I vow - Not there nor then but here and now. To nature's norms have I complied - Once upon a time lived I! February 27, 2023

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Date: 3/28/2023 8:49:00 AM
Another beautiful poem, Margarita. Your poetry has a built-in preservative: truth. Congratulations!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/28/2023 2:52:00 PM
Sometimes bitter but well preserved:) Thank you.
Date: 3/26/2023 9:58:00 AM
I really like your witty wordplay, Margarita, congratulations on your win
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/28/2023 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Michelle.
Date: 3/26/2023 7:53:00 AM
Very nice, Margarita, congratulations:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/28/2023 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Joanna.
Date: 2/27/2023 8:20:00 PM
!Very impressive, Margarita. This is very well thought out and written.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/27/2023 8:52:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel! Been thinking:)
Date: 2/27/2023 6:58:00 PM
My, my! An easy fav, dear Margarita
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/27/2023 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, I’ve tried!
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