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Once Upon a Time

I compare you my love to the dawn's early sky, a bold, bright display that starts out quite shy. At first glance, one may miss your undeniable spark. But my soul was ignited when you stepped from the dark. Warm is your heart, brilliant your mind, with a passion for life so rare to find. If life is about seizing a moment in time, I'll capture each for "auld lang syne". A kiss or a touch, our sweet words expressed, all snapshots of love, we'll one day cherish. When we're old and gray, no more in our prime, these days will be our "once upon a time". I compare you my love to the dawn's early sky, my new day forever, our love ne'er to die. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2012 4:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the win. A Great poem to read and reflect upon.
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Date: 4/16/2012 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P.D's "Under Ten Minutes" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2012 11:47:00 AM
CONGRATS RHONDA ON A FIRST PLACE WIN FOR EXQUISITE POETRY LUV..
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:42:00 AM
So beautiful!!! Congratulations on your win Rhonda!! well deserved my friend! big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda on a beautiful write and winning entry. Beautiful :)
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:50:00 PM
Rhonda, , a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem in my contest. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:11:00 PM
A beautiful poem and well deserving of first place it is so romantic congratulations Rhonda xx
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Date: 3/29/2012 9:54:00 AM
a fragrant comparison and lovely analogy Rhonda.. sweet words so uplifting and inspiring too luv..
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Date: 3/28/2012 10:46:00 AM
Whew! I seriously have goosebumps... a beautiful tribute of love Rhonda. Recorded forever in your heart and in verse for the world to share... thank you!
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Date: 3/28/2012 9:29:00 AM
Your poem is very beautiful!
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