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Once Upon a Time

Once upon a time There lived a girl She loved to dance and whirl But her eyes forever were on the chime She didn’t want to miss a moment Of the rich life given to her And wanted to taste every liquor In a life of total abandonment But time played a cruel trick Just when she was in the ripe The devil decided to swipe And her time ended in a flick But her spirit lives on still Can be seen collecting flowers Maybe singing from those lonely towers Or sadly viewing time from some hill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/1/2010 6:29:00 AM
thankxxx Tahera.. how are u coming along with your poem for me luv? enjoy a blessed day with lots of luv my friend..
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:21:00 AM
wonderful poem just breathtakingly good
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Date: 11/30/2010 9:43:00 AM
This is very touching,friend.Your attempt to make the girl eternal is great.I enjoyed it
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Date: 11/30/2010 5:24:00 AM
rendered so poignantly, dear tahera.. time steals or heals life.. good luck in the contest! wonderful thoughts! thanks for your happy visit on my home page. warmest, nette
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Date: 11/30/2010 5:02:00 AM
Enjoyed the reminder of my fleeting happy carefree childhood.....I used to love to skip and twirl until I fell down.
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Date: 11/29/2010 8:10:00 PM
Very interesting with a fairy tale like quality to it, Tahera. good luck in the contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2010 1:37:00 PM
Hello Tahera, Well done, I love it. Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/29/2010 10:47:00 AM
Thnx Tahera for appreciating my poem "Newly wed bride adorned" ........... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/29/2010 8:42:00 AM
This piece just blew me away Tahera.. so simple yet so profound.. so elegant ..so well written my friend.. good luck in the contest by BG.. this is a superior piece luv.. hope all is well my friend..
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Date: 11/29/2010 3:48:00 AM
Good one ..Good luck in the contest..I am glad that I chose this one read this morn..Sara
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Date: 11/29/2010 1:25:00 AM
Incredible entry for the contest, Tahera. We live carefree, often with little knowledge of how short life can be. It's important to make every moment count so we don't end up "sadly viewing time" like this girl. Deep and insightful poem that will do well in Barbara's contest! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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