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Once Upon a Time - In Mosquito City

Begone, you blood sucking bastards How dare you step foot upon my soil Stay away from me, or else... I will go mid-evil on all of your heartless souls, if you have one...that is You or any of your pitiful welt leaving friends best not nuisance me For if you do...I will kill you all I will flatten you gone, like a ghost that never was Even your stolen blood not be seen I will paint, with all of your blood...sweet nothings on all my walls Remember, he who lives by the sword...will die by the sword He Who Lives By The Sword Dies By The Sword Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One 12-2-2019 *1st Place

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Greg Gaul

Date: 12/16/2019 6:53:00 PM

Charles, this is powerful verse bursting with passion and righteous rage. Well penned deserving of recognition. Congratulations.

Joseph May

Date: 12/16/2019 6:30:00 PM

I like your take on the theme Charles, Very creative, Congrats on your win..

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2019 6:23:00 PM

Wow! Charles, This was well written and very clever. You deserved a first place spot. Congratulations! Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends my friend:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 12/15/2019 7:04:00 PM

Bold and to the point.. I didn't know what to say. Congratulations on your win., Charles Hugs Eve

Charles Messina
Date: 12/16/2019 4:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve.. (lol) sorry. Hugs Charlie xo

Na Na

Date: 12/15/2019 5:22:00 PM

Well done on getting a winning poem :)~ Charlie

Charles Messina
Date: 12/16/2019 4:20:00 PM

Thank you, Greg. I appreciate your visit

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2019 4:17:00 PM

I loved this one Charlie, really made me smile, but i can also relate to this.. i hate them... ruin your holidays! Some people are offended by profanity, but i see the poetic nature of your term... Congratulations on your first place.

Charles Messina
Date: 12/16/2019 4:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, SO. I am truly humbled. Of course, I would never use this profanity towards any human being.. except possibly my ex-wife (lol) kidding. So glad you looked through the glass ball and saw the poetic nature of the term. Thanks again my friend.... blessings Charlie