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Once There Was a Love

Together they sat by the side of a jumping cataract Watching the sunlight dancing through the smoky vapour With every droplet mirroring a spectrum of shades Dreamt of a time when they would be man n’ wife Never knowing one would vanish out from the sky like a rainbow. He was a candle that glowed luminous Emitting undeniable light of love and warmth Who shone on her like the light of a harvest moon A pillar, she thought, she could twine round Like a creeping vine on a trellis Now, as she sees the homing bird coming to join its mate And listens to the notes of a nightingale from the deserted wood She thinks of him and slips into an abyss of agony and longing With waves of commotion swirling in her head And sees her sky suddenly turning stygian black When the setting sun in its twilight glows When the waning day’s last glorious rays enclose She seeks him in the hovering silence and seclusion of life And wonder if love adrift and lost in the air Would return once more to alight in her shattered heart....! October.17.2022 ~Placed First~ Inspired by a Song- Once There was a Love Poetry Contest Sponsor.JCB Brul

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Date: 11/11/2022 9:42:00 PM
Beautiful write, Valsa, congrats on your superb win!
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Date: 10/18/2022 4:48:00 PM
You tap into a really emotional aspect of our human journey, for one ita almost like something not living up to its best. It's a pure piece that is well done
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Date: 10/18/2022 4:03:00 PM
Breathlessly gorgeous Valsa, another Favorite. This is so sad, and so very beautiful. A true poetic piece of shear perfection <3
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Date: 10/18/2022 3:44:00 PM
A FAV for me, Valsa. Your words of Love flow smoothly to those that know of deep Love, whether experienced, desired, or lost. A lovely song to inspire your verse, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 10/17/2022 9:05:00 PM
Great imagery, Valsa, and very sad. A loving verse. Blessing my friend.
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Date: 10/17/2022 12:00:00 PM
wow, you did a magnificent job with this one, Valsa. Great show of the sadness of lost love.
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Date: 10/17/2022 10:57:00 AM
You must be a Bollywood scriptwriter! Aloha!
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Date: 10/17/2022 8:35:00 AM
I really like how you interpreted the song,  Valsa. Love and romantic ideals are always pleasant things to aspire to. A narrative that was told really effectively.  He was like a flame that shed a brilliant light. Putting forth an incontestable glow of affection and coziness. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 10/17/2022 6:41:00 AM
Very romantic verse Valsa, great interpretation of the song. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
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Date: 10/17/2022 5:12:00 AM
Aspirations of love and romance always delightful. A story well conveyed Valsa--He was a candle that glowed luminous Emitting undeniable light of love and warmth...
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Date: 10/17/2022 4:30:00 AM
Very expressive and emotive work you have penned in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I hope just a work and not a real happening in your life. Your visits to my page are spot on. Sara
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Date: 10/17/2022 4:10:00 AM
Your words shatter my soul dear Mala, you write with great beauty and deep feeling, like a poet of old. Love it, its fav, for me, :)
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Date: 10/17/2022 1:19:00 AM
Your last line is munificent. Alas lost love will always be popular. My last post is on the same lines.
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