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Once I Was

Darkening clouds approach, pending consume Existing days appear less I'm outside, once inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/18/2011 8:58:00 PM
why is it that we sometimes feel this way.. I can totally relate to this one James.. Hope that you are in a better space today.. Enjoy the week ahead ;) love Wilma
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Date: 12/16/2011 11:01:00 PM
Grey days of gloom! But if anyone can get cheered up,it's got to be you, James.
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Date: 12/16/2011 3:54:00 PM
Hello James, I feel this one within my very soul....Sad but oh such wonderful writing here. Love, Shar
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