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Once Called Paradise

Gravel road winds up to the gate logs from a bygone era, sturdy electrified now, to keep out ~ or perhaps to keep in ~ The cowshed, chicken coop scraggly gardens and grapevines all still there, the ground still bare desert sand, flies around but no one dies of thirst... Paint's peeling, metal's rusting fragrance carried on the air Paradise once for this sixty-year-old-lad walking the fields, remembering dad

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Date: 9/10/2023 6:40:00 PM
A beautiful write, Gershon! We’ve walked with you into childhood with its futuristic venue.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/10/2023 7:27:00 PM
Gosh, glad you like it, Kim!
Date: 9/10/2023 6:11:00 PM
Well done my friend. The past remains alive and well...in our heads.
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Date: 9/10/2023 7:22:00 PM
Righto! At least until they every newborn is equipped with a chip. ~ Wone T Belong
Date: 9/10/2023 5:11:00 PM
What a wonderful write about revisiting the good old days. Very touched with a great final line!
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Date: 9/10/2023 7:18:00 PM
Hey, thank you, David. A comment like this from you makes my day!! ~ Joy and Light, Gershon
Date: 9/10/2023 11:44:00 AM
A couple of thoughts ran through my head when reading this gs. First – Dr. Thomas Szasz, who questioned whether asylums were built to keep crazies in, or the sane out. Second – Joni Mitchell and the Big Yellow Taxi. Third – a brilliant, heart-touching and warming tribute to dad and times past. Sincerely sentiment and melancholy bought together in your last stanza gw. Just lovely! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/10/2023 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for the enthusiasm, Linda! So much appreciated. Hope you are well and happy! Light and Joy, Gershon
Date: 9/9/2023 9:04:00 PM
Nostalgic, Bitter-sweet memories of a time that has sadly passed. That time seemed more people minded and wholesome, somehow. A lovely verse to read and reminisce about. Thank you, Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/9/2023 9:11:00 PM
Shirley, thank YOU for such a wonderful comment. Very much appreciated. ~ Gershon

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