Once Again At Last

Instant eye contact
And all the world fades away
Mists of memory
I had always dreamed this day
The orange sun is smiling


Written on 11/19/2020
For: QUIN-TO your five line Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 11/24/2020 8:02:00 PM
Ah, your tanka is absolutely stunning, Evelyn. Your tender yet striking imagery brings me to the center of an especially beautiful moment. Lovely artwork reflects your exquisite poem in harmony. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/24/2020 9:48:00 PM
This is my first tanka, Susan, so I am especially glad that you like it. Thank you for your kind words and congratulations.
Date: 11/23/2020 11:30:00 AM
Evelyn, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/23/2020 1:10:00 PM
Thank you for the joyful remarks. :=)
Date: 11/22/2020 5:17:00 PM
this is so pretty. Congrats on your win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/22/2020 7:49:00 PM
I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)
Date: 11/22/2020 10:27:00 AM
Master painter of images in color my friend! I love the way you use color to bring us into the picture! Congratulations on your win!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/22/2020 3:31:00 PM
Please accept my heartfelt thanks, Sam. All my best, Evelyn :)
Date: 11/22/2020 7:46:00 AM
Very descriptive and emotive. I enjoyed reading this one. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/22/2020 9:43:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words and congratulations, Sara. :)
Date: 11/20/2020 6:46:00 AM
A lovely tanka, seems like a warm day..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/20/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment. :)
Date: 11/20/2020 1:41:00 AM
A moment to remember. Well done Evelyn. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/20/2020 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. :)
Date: 11/19/2020 3:10:00 PM
The moment is forever...Well done
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/19/2020 5:31:00 PM
Some rare moments are like that. Thank you.
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