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I thought of him that day Was too emotional to pray From my vows I’d never stray Once, I felt alive beside him I longed to touch him deeply When he called to me sweetly Promised to love me completely Once, I felt his love embrace me There was feeling I could share Feelings gentle, soft and rare Reminding me that we were a pair Too in love to take a dare We danced to music love inspired I whispered to him what I was feeling Beliefs so spiritual they brought healing Caused my heart to be caught in dreaming Once, his hand touched me with passion I knew his urgency was meant to cure me Reconcile my intimacy and joys so carefree Teaching my heart and soul to always agree Once, he warmed me with love that brings peace There was feeling I could share Feelings gentle, soft and rare Reminding me that we were a pair Too in love to take a dare We danced to music love inspired

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Date: 8/23/2020 2:16:00 PM
Super romantic piece Gina, such good penning and nice imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 8/23/2020 7:40:00 AM
A romantic write by a woman that was in love totally and absolutely - a genuine, sincere love poem which I enjoyed tremendously. Well penned my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/23/2020 5:17:00 AM
- A lovely and romantic poem, love the chorus Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/22/2020 12:17:00 AM
So beautiful my friend! I love it..To my FAVES!
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Date: 8/21/2020 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations! Very solid song. I see a lot of pattern, aside from of course firm rhyme. End of verse words 'embrace', 'inspired', 'passion', 'peace' further pull your beautiful lyrics into melody.
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Date: 8/21/2020 6:06:00 AM
" Once " big word...a clear sign of direction...Enjoyed it...I imaged you in it...Well done
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