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On Your Visit To Mars

Three times higher on Mars you can jump, which is great, but you'll sure be a grump if you visit the spot so incredibly hot that the sun, when it's close, roasts your rump! For the Life On Mars Poetry Contest of Brian Davey

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 1:41:00 AM

Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Andrea! Love the wit in this and the way u did that! How thrilling will it be to visit!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/27/2015 12:16:00 AM

Nice to see that someone appreciated the gravity of the situation. Fun write, Andrea, and congratulations, Viv x

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 5:12:00 PM

ANDREA Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 12:50:00 PM

Very humourous Andrea - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2015 11:21:00 AM

Funny!Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Joseph May

Date: 7/26/2015 10:18:00 AM

Lol...Nicely done Andrea...Congrats on a fine win

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/8/2015 5:28:00 AM

You have a natural talent for humor Andrea. I have tried to come up with something for your contest but still have zero. A great entry this poem is Andrea!

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/5/2015 5:17:00 PM

Oh you are at your best,,

Thomas Martin

Date: 7/3/2015 6:21:00 PM

lol, Andrea! Enjoyed this. Thank you for visiting my poetry!

Daver Austin

Date: 7/2/2015 1:52:00 PM

Yes. I hear a trip to Mars is a pain in the yes. Thank you for this one Astro Andrea. Love, daver

Funom Makama

Date: 7/2/2015 10:33:00 AM

Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/2/2015 8:05:00 AM

LOL, what a hoot to read. I'd really like a bit more heat around here.

Jennifer Walker

Date: 7/1/2015 10:55:00 PM

Great sense of humor sis along with the facts.

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/1/2015 10:58:00 AM

This is a fun limerick that tells a story through humor and witty prose. Emile.

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/30/2015 7:53:00 PM

What I want to know is how they know you can jump 3 times higher. :) It gets hot enough here in summer. I'm good. :)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/30/2015 10:10:00 PM

they figured it out by science, something about the gravity field! and one of the hemispheres there gets hotter than any place on earth, but just for a short time.

James Tate

Date: 6/30/2015 5:59:00 PM

Hey, that limerick follows the rule of limericks very well. I like your light humor. Well done, Andrea!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/30/2015 3:47:00 AM

Nice one!! I am very appreciative of your candor. You are blessed with a wonderful disposition. That makes the people who know you very lucky--like me!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2015 7:28:00 PM

This is fun Andrea.

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 6/29/2015 6:35:00 PM

Quite a leap of fun!,,and thanks for the comment Andrea....Peter.

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/29/2015 5:44:00 PM

Some humorous science fiction here. Quite amusing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Tim Smith

Date: 6/29/2015 4:08:00 PM

lol...I bet the jumping would be fun

Constance La France

Date: 6/29/2015 2:17:00 PM

Andrea, fun write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark purple

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2015 12:29:00 PM

i like the light-hearted feel of tis amazing limerick, andie,, mine was quite serious!.. refreshing, fun!.. huggs

James Peranteau

Date: 6/29/2015 8:08:00 AM

Cute widdle limerick my dear poet. I'll be sure to bring along the satchel packed wit marshmellows the next time that Steven Tyler and I head out on our next pre-arranged space trip ! .*smiles* Have a wonderful week Andrea........much love, james

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/29/2015 4:02:00 AM

What a beautiful Mars toast you have offered in this sweet limerick ideal for roasting the rumps. Love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor