Andrea Dietrich Poet Limerick

On Your Visit To Mars

Three times higher on Mars you can jump,

which is great, but you'll sure be a grump

if you visit the spot

so incredibly hot

that the sun, when it's close, roasts your rump! 


For the Life On Mars Poetry Contest of  Brian Davey

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 27, 2015 at 1:41 AM Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Andrea! Love the wit in this and the way u did that! How thrilling will it be to visit!

Viv Wigley July 27, 2015 at 12:16 AM Nice to see that someone appreciated the gravity of the situation. Fun write, Andrea, and congratulations, Viv x

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 5:12 PM ANDREA Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**

Jan Allison July 26, 2015 at 12:50 PM Very humourous Andrea - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper July 26, 2015 at 11:21 AM Funny!Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Joseph May July 26, 2015 at 10:18 AM Lol...Nicely done Andrea...Congrats on a fine win

Connie Marcum Wong July 8, 2015 at 5:28 AM You have a natural talent for humor Andrea. I have tried to come up with something for your contest but still have zero. A great entry this poem is Andrea!

Harry Horsman July 5, 2015 at 5:17 PM Oh you are at your best,,

Thomas Martin July 3, 2015 at 6:21 PM lol, Andrea! Enjoyed this. Thank you for visiting my poetry!

Daver Austin July 2, 2015 at 1:52 PM Yes. I hear a trip to Mars is a pain in the yes. Thank you for this one Astro Andrea. Love, daver

Funom Makama July 2, 2015 at 10:33 AM Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.

Scott Thirtyseven July 2, 2015 at 8:05 AM LOL, what a hoot to read. I'd really like a bit more heat around here.

Jennifer Walker July 1, 2015 at 10:55 PM Great sense of humor sis along with the facts.

Emile Pinet July 1, 2015 at 10:58 AM This is a fun limerick that tells a story through humor and witty prose. Emile.

Robert Johnson June 30, 2015 at 7:53 PM What I want to know is how they know you can jump 3 times higher. :) It gets hot enough here in summer. I'm good. :) Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2015 at 10:10 PM they figured it out by science, something about the gravity field! and one of the hemispheres there gets hotter than any place on earth, but just for a short time.

James Tate June 30, 2015 at 5:59 PM Hey, that limerick follows the rule of limericks very well. I like your light humor. Well done, Andrea!

Duke Beaufort June 30, 2015 at 3:47 AM Nice one!! I am very appreciative of your candor. You are blessed with a wonderful disposition. That makes the people who know you very lucky--like me!

Richard Lamoureux June 29, 2015 at 7:28 PM This is fun Andrea.

Peter Lewis Holmes June 29, 2015 at 6:35 PM Quite a leap of fun!,,and thanks for the comment Andrea....Peter.

Matthew Anish June 29, 2015 at 5:44 PM Some humorous science fiction here. Quite amusing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Tim Smith June 29, 2015 at 4:08 PM lol...I bet the jumping would be fun

Constance La France June 29, 2015 at 2:17 PM Andrea, fun write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark purple

Nette Onclaud June 29, 2015 at 12:29 PM i like the light-hearted feel of tis amazing limerick, andie,, mine was quite serious!.. refreshing, fun!.. huggs

James Peranteau June 29, 2015 at 8:08 AM Cute widdle limerick my dear poet. I'll be sure to bring along the satchel packed wit marshmellows the next time that Steven Tyler and I head out on our next pre-arranged space trip ! .*smiles* Have a wonderful week Andrea........much love, james

Ravindra K Kapoor June 29, 2015 at 4:02 AM What a beautiful Mars toast you have offered in this sweet limerick ideal for roasting the rumps. Love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor

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