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On Your Visit to Mars

Three times higher on Mars you can jump, which is great, but you'll sure be a grump if you visit the spot so incredibly hot that the sun, when it's close, roasts your rump! For the Life On Mars Poetry Contest of Brian Davey

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Date: 8/1/2015 11:00:00 PM
Andrea.. Loved your creative Mars write and I congratulate you on terrific win!
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:41:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Andrea! Love the wit in this and the way u did that! How thrilling will it be to visit!
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:16:00 AM
Nice to see that someone appreciated the gravity of the situation. Fun write, Andrea, and congratulations, Viv x
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:12:00 PM
ANDREA Congratulations on your MARS win :) **SKAT**
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:50:00 PM
Very humourous Andrea - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:21:00 AM
Funny!Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2015 10:18:00 AM
Lol...Nicely done Andrea...Congrats on a fine win
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Date: 7/8/2015 5:28:00 AM
You have a natural talent for humor Andrea. I have tried to come up with something for your contest but still have zero. A great entry this poem is Andrea!
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Date: 7/5/2015 5:17:00 PM
Oh you are at your best,,
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:21:00 PM
lol, Andrea! Enjoyed this. Thank you for visiting my poetry!
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Date: 7/2/2015 1:52:00 PM
Yes. I hear a trip to Mars is a pain in the yes. Thank you for this one Astro Andrea. Love, daver
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:33:00 AM
Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.
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Date: 7/2/2015 8:05:00 AM
LOL, what a hoot to read. I'd really like a bit more heat around here.
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Date: 7/1/2015 10:55:00 PM
Great sense of humor sis along with the facts.
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Date: 7/1/2015 10:58:00 AM
This is a fun limerick that tells a story through humor and witty prose. Emile.
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Date: 6/30/2015 7:53:00 PM
What I want to know is how they know you can jump 3 times higher. :) It gets hot enough here in summer. I'm good. :)
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:10:00 PM
they figured it out by science, something about the gravity field! and one of the hemispheres there gets hotter than any place on earth, but just for a short time.
Date: 6/30/2015 5:59:00 PM
Hey, that limerick follows the rule of limericks very well. I like your light humor. Well done, Andrea!
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Date: 6/30/2015 3:47:00 AM
Nice one!! I am very appreciative of your candor. You are blessed with a wonderful disposition. That makes the people who know you very lucky--like me!
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Date: 6/29/2015 7:28:00 PM
This is fun Andrea.
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Date: 6/29/2015 6:35:00 PM
Quite a leap of fun!,,and thanks for the comment Andrea....Peter.
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Date: 6/29/2015 5:44:00 PM
Some humorous science fiction here. Quite amusing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/29/2015 4:08:00 PM
lol...I bet the jumping would be fun
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Date: 6/29/2015 2:17:00 PM
Andrea, fun write for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark purple
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Date: 6/29/2015 12:29:00 PM
i like the light-hearted feel of tis amazing limerick, andie,, mine was quite serious!.. refreshing, fun!.. huggs
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Date: 6/29/2015 8:08:00 AM
Cute widdle limerick my dear poet. I'll be sure to bring along the satchel packed wit marshmellows the next time that Steven Tyler and I head out on our next pre-arranged space trip ! .*smiles* Have a wonderful week Andrea........much love, james
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