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Sue got wedged on the exercise bike And she doesn’t look so lady like With both legs akimbo She looked like a bimbo Told the trainer to go take a hike! 20th July 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 8/28/2015 3:55:00 PM

I bet quite a few bimbo's have made exhibitions of themselves, guys included, boy it would make me chuckle, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/28/2015 4:02:00 PM

Thanks James I've not been to a gym in years:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/28/2015 8:22:00 AM

Haha... so cute thank goodness I stay away from gyms Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2015 9:13:00 AM

Me too Eve - not my scene:-) hugs Jan xx

James Tate

Date: 7/25/2015 8:14:00 AM

Cute as a bug's ear! I too have an exercise bike, but I don't use it often enough.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 8:20:00 AM

Don't get wedged on it James! hugs jan xx

Mary Rotman

Date: 7/24/2015 3:18:00 PM

This is really cute--love the bimbo rhyme. Still chuckling over "akimbo...bimbo." Suggestion for last line to fit the meter better. Those last lines are so hard to come up with! Just contact me if interested. BTW, thanks for the kind comments on my poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 3:20:00 PM

Thanks Mary - do soup mail me with your suggestion:-) hugs Jan xx

Cona Adams

Date: 7/24/2015 9:17:00 AM

Cute limerick, Jan. I enjoyed this.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 9:28:00 AM

Thanks Cona:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/23/2015 11:06:00 PM

Jan, how happy il be if i meet you! love your humor, please throw me some :O!hehehe !! cute poem!~Olive Eloisa

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 2:34:00 AM

Oh it would be awesome to meet Olive... who knows what the future will bring for any of us:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2015 10:26:00 PM

very cute, Jan. I wrote a sonnet a long time ago about my nazi spin class instructor. Still waiting for a contest to post that one up for. haha. How are you today?

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2015 2:33:00 AM

ha ha ha you should soup mail me that I bet its hilarious lol Am doing fine thanks getting my energy back after being knocked for 6 with that infection:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

Date: 7/22/2015 7:43:00 AM

Happy to see you're getting on the limerick express!!! Love, Brother Jack xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:46:00 AM

I joined it years ago lol:-) hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/21/2015 2:48:00 PM

HaHaaa, very good limerick, Jan! Made me laugh :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2015 2:50:00 PM

Thanks Laura:-) Hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/21/2015 11:34:00 AM

You have given a nice dose of smiling vitamin to laugh ha ha ha... A creative fun beautifully done. 7 for this gem. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2015 2:43:00 PM

Thanks BL:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/21/2015 11:30:00 AM

I'm smiling widely Jan! "all akimbo like a bimbo" real good rhyme and imagery there...haha. hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2015 2:42:00 PM

I couldn't resist Kim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 7/21/2015 7:41:00 AM

A very delightful limerick my dear friend, Jan. Thank you for this precious gem and the the wide smiles :) Thank you so much as well for your precious time stopping by and your encouraging words. More blessings! love lots and big hug, Leonora

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2015 2:42:00 PM

I do appreciate your support Leonora so glad I made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx