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On Walking

I recently went walking On grounds around a lake, Pristine as the morning dew, Pure beauty mine to take. The silence there was deafening The purity profound, And the meaning of life itself Was all around. Not even birds could quite be heard Or the humming of the bees, As I was lost in time and space Where I never felt so free. I felt the breeze inside of me In each heartbeat and breath I took, As Love revealed from a bottle unsealed With new eyes through which to look. Although alone, forever at home No one to interfere, With whom, why, what or where I was To see the world so clear. The sky so blue I felt imbued With traces of the immortal, And rendezvoused with family and friends Somehow through this lake’s portal. And wandered ‘round so quite unbound In body, mind and soul, Until waking from this splendid dream And feeling lost and cold. © Terrell Martin, 03/12/2025

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William HAYNES

Date: 3/24/2025 4:10:00 PM

Sometimes the only thing real is the dream world. excellent poem

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/25/2025 5:33:00 PM

Thank you, William. Sorry I missed you yesterday, but I've been busier than a cat on a hot tin roof. Too many chores and going back to work is cutting into my play (poetry) time! But I truly appreciate you dropping by, reading and commenting and especially glad you liked the poem. I owe you one so I'll see ya soon /// Terrell

Michael Tor

Date: 3/12/2025 5:26:00 PM

Lovely poetry my friend and the ending it was a dream, great ending. Hope you are doing well your poetry was wonderful to read...

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/12/2025 6:31:00 PM

Hello, my good friend, Michael. Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read and respond to the poem, "On Walking." I'm glad you enjoyed it and look forward to dropping by your place for some uplifting reading of yours as well. Until then, take care & "Write on," Terrell

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2025 4:16:00 PM

Oh I got to the end to see it was a dream. But what a nice dream it was. To see all your loved ones!

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/12/2025 6:25:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I'm always blessed beyond measure whenever you stop by and read one of my less than perfect attempts at poetry. In full disclosure, the family reunion was a bit of "poetic license" I threw in for good measure. I hope that doesn't spoil your appreciation for either me or the poem. In any case, thank you again for your wonderful thoughts. Cheers, Terrell

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/12/2025 12:16:00 PM

Dear Terrell, a "splendid dream", indeed. But bittersweet upon awakening. Your soulful poem is enchanting in its dreamy interaction with Nature and with "traces of the immortal". I adore this poem and especially "As Love revealed from a bottle unsealed" - not only does this verse give the reader a delectable internal rhyme but it also speaks of spirituals gifts given and appreciated. Your sixth stanza was especially resonate with me. Your vivid imagery and rich metaphors throughout are divine and Divine! Warmest wishes my inspiring poet friend.. ~Susan

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/12/2025 6:18:00 PM

Dearest Susan, you're always lavish in your praises which tend to make me blush with what I feel is undeserved pride of minimal poetic accomplishment. Nevertheless, it tickles me to no end knowing how much you seem to uncover in my poetry and capture the essence of it all. Comments like yours are music to my ears and food for the next poem. Can't wait to read your next piece as well. Until then, Warm & Happy Hugs, Terrell

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2025 12:10:00 PM

- It was a wonderful dream, Terrell ... too bad it wasn't real - I love this deafening silence in nature ... a wonderful feeling of freedom :) - Beautifully described -

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/12/2025 6:09:00 PM

Thank you, Anne. I don't often dream or should I say, I don't often remember my dreams, but this was a real "Doozy!" It was the most alive and vivid than I can recall in a very long time. I sincerely appreciate you reading and kind response. And glad you enjoyed the read. All the BEST Miss Poetess!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/12/2025 11:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your write. Some dreams can be so very real. I had one the other night. I could not believe it was a dream. Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/12/2025 6:04:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. It was a VERY vivid dream which I don't often experience but this quite extraordinary. Hence, the poem. The family reunion, I must admit, however, was a bit of "poetic license!" Otherwise, it's true to its nature. Thanks again, Terrell

Lin Lane

Date: 3/12/2025 5:53:00 AM

Walks are wonderful opportunities to plug into subjects that are impossible when a hustling, bustling world is too loud. Your reverie took place inside of you. The solitude of the lake was merely a setting. Your lines evoke the loneliness very well, Terrell. Sorrowfully, but poetically skilled.

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/12/2025 7:04:00 AM

Thank you for reading and your very thoughtful response. All the best to you and yours, Terrell

Tom Woody

Date: 3/12/2025 5:44:00 AM

I had a similar experience just yesterday. The beauty overwhelmed me and I just had to stop and say a prayer of thanks to the Creator of such things. Awesome poem Martin. Snippets of peace are always welcome

Terrell Martin
Date: 3/12/2025 7:07:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. To be clear, this truly was a dream rather than an actual walk about. I appreciate your thoughts and happy to hear you had a more "realistic" encounter. They're usually the best kind! Thanks again, Terrell