Eileen Manassian Poet Free verse

On Velvet- Naani Repost

On push velvet of the midnight sky
The stars dance
Scintillating in sensuality
Like your eyes

Ebullient, I ride
The shooting star of your love
Combusting into flames
That rock my universe

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Harry Horsman July 26, 2014 at 4:19 PM wow, this is so impressive, your poetry truly does scintillate. Eileen Manassian July 26, 2014 at 6:59 PM Scintillate...one of my favorite words, Harry. Thanks ever so much for visiting. I've missed you.

Charmaine Chircop July 26, 2014 at 3:23 PM I love the title and your poem's stellar enchanting ride. Eileen Manassian July 26, 2014 at 6:59 PM Thank you, my darling.

Robert Lindley July 26, 2014 at 2:34 PM This is a fine write my friend.. I think it will place very high in the contest.... Bravo!!! Eileen Manassian July 26, 2014 at 7:00 PM Hi, Robert. It has placed....but I was going through turmoil at the time and deleted it later. I'm reposting some of my work. Thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2014 at 1:45 PM - Oh ... so beautiful, Eileen !! - ( it rock! :) - Wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian July 26, 2014 at 7:01 PM Thanks, Sunshine! Coming your way soon.

Justin Bordner July 26, 2014 at 1:19 PM Comet tails all the way! I love how you love love. J.A.B. Eileen Manassian July 26, 2014 at 7:02 PM Thanks, Justin. Thank you for appreciating my work....an expression of my soul

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2014 at 1:18 PM this is GORGEOUS!!! Is this an edited version? I hope your original did well in the contest because this one ROCKS!!! Eileen Manassian July 26, 2014 at 7:03 PM Andrea....it didn't get top win, but your praise....gives me that satisfaction I need. Thanks