On Valentine's Day At School

valentine's day...
all geometrical figures
tend to be heart shaped




© kash poet
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 3, 2015 at 1:14 AM
I remember them days and shape. SKAT
A  Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 1:13 AM
Kash, this poem is sweet. SKAT
Neels Avatar
February 21, 2012 at 4:47 AM
Cute write Kash, congratulations on your win :)
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on the great win in ~Brian's~ "Suit Yourself" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 8:54 PM
This poem is as unique as you seem to be Kash and that is one of the highest compliments one poet can give another, as I see it. Outstanding work and no wonder it came in First. It is very deserving of the honor my friend. Congratulations! Blessings, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 4:45 AM
good one very good like it xx
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 4:42 AM
rawrrhr, kashi buddy!... you sure took this to a new poetic level.. sweet congrats on your big win... :) hugggs!
Arno Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 6:36 PM
Congratulations Kash...Great job...Jon
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 5:57 PM
congrats KJash on another terrific winning poem luv.. so excellent..
Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash. This is a short delightful read.
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 2:16 PM
Kash, this is a very good write. You are a talented poet and it shows in your work. Well done, my friend. Congrats on winning 1st place in Brian's contest..........S.Ronthorpe
Horne Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Yes, how true! Many congrats, my friend : )
Scholtz Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Kash, love elizabeth
Fraser Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 1:12 PM
We are so geometrical, for it's in our eyes. It's when we ask be my Valentine, that we are in total surprise. This is just lovely Kash - I love your work. I really need to put the shift in now - have a terrific weekend :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 11:10 AM
cuteness!... how surprising to imagine geometrical shapes turned into hearts... creative; you are on a roll, buddy!... delighted! :) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 10:59 AM
WHAT A DELIGHT this is, KAsh. I'll see your others later!!! you are becoming a haiku master.
Guzzi Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 5:57 AM
hmmmm ..not really? [ my verse you needed the dictionary for was in the regional dialect of California in the 1980's AND had archetecture terms in it LOL most folks will learn a word or two if they wish!] HUGS Light & Love
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