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The silence seems almost against the norm, for nature is unnaturally still. The proverbial “calm before the storm” permeates the air, but some lightening will appear, and leaves will quiver on the trees. Stay not outside! The wind is getting strong. This is not your usual summer breeze. Get ready, for the onslaught will be long. The god of sky’s impressionistic art swipes brush strokes on a canvas painted black, displaying genius with his mighty heart as if he were a warrior on attack. His lightening is the masterpiece we see on this night filled with electricity. Oct. 23, 2018 for "Describe a thunder storm without the sense of sound" Contest

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Date: 4/20/2018 9:22:00 AM
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Date: 3/4/2018 5:28:00 PM
Hiya Petal, I love watching a good storm, your words conjured up a great picture here, though I prefer it with sound effects myself. And I see you're a time traveller too, you never cease to amaze. Take care, Richard
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:41:00 PM
Seems to me that even without the description of sound I was hearing thunder in those lines.
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:53:00 PM
Good work. Reads like winning material to me. Way to go.. I think that I could feel some thunder the way it rolls up there. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:54:00 PM
Good job on your approach and ultimate write, it's a great package. Another I have nothing for as yet - which is NOT a concern, I'm in the flow - Yi to life lately and to this poem - it is dramatic. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:50:00 PM
First word that comes to mind is Excellent! I see Phyllis said it was excellent too. I bet this will be at the top of the list! I love it! : )
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Date: 2/25/2018 10:01:00 AM
An excellent sonnet Andrea. You do those so well. Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Andrea...best wishes
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Date: 2/25/2018 7:33:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/24/2018 2:47:00 PM
Andrea, you have penned a beautiful poem, best of luck in the contest ~
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Date: 2/24/2018 7:05:00 AM
A storm can be so awesome...completely frightening...As you said,"His lightning is the masterpiece we see on this night filled with electricity."
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Date: 2/24/2018 4:55:00 AM
I love this, Andrea, and I love thunderstorms. It really ignites something in me to hear the thunder and see the lightening flash across the sky, especially at night. A perfect descriptive poem.
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Date: 2/24/2018 4:21:00 AM
A great descriptive verse Andrea. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 2/23/2018 9:23:00 PM
Well done, Andrea. Lovely imagery.
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Date: 2/23/2018 9:23:00 PM
What a flash in the dark! Went to synagogue tonight and prayed to God. There was nice music and food there. Talked to an Israeli musician girl. Less than half my age! One can always dream. Do you remember the TV show "Northern Exposure". Peace &Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/23/2018 8:04:00 PM
Very well-written and descriptive, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 2/23/2018 6:47:00 PM
Ohhhh...great job, Andrea! I knew you'd come up with a winner for the contest.
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Date: 2/23/2018 4:16:00 PM
You painted the scene well with winds, breeze, and brush strokes.. without sounds! Best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 2/23/2018 10:09:00 AM
A splendid sonnet dear Andrea... Loved it... Soo beautiful... Good luck in the contest...
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