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On This Day of Showers

On this day of showers Dampened streets, a small café, a kiss out in the rain Affection sprinkled moments with the one that I adore Beneath a red umbrella as our hearts choose to remain On this day of showers where I could not love you more 10/30/18 Written for: The Red Umbrella Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2018 7:39:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Sara

Chris Green
Date: 11/20/2018 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sara.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/19/2018 6:15:00 PM

A lot of beautiful romance conveyed in just four lines, Chris. Well-done, and congrats on your win. Sandra :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/20/2018 9:56:00 AM

Thanks so very much Sandra. I am happy you liked this one

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2018 12:54:00 PM

aww how sweet and romantic Chris, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thanks so very much Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2018 11:26:00 AM

- A wonderful winning poem, Chris :) ... Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise

Debjani Mitra

Date: 11/14/2018 3:47:00 AM

Such a beautiful rendition in so few words..love spontaneously flows from this Congratulations

Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thank you so very much Debjani. I am so happy you liked this one.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/13/2018 10:45:00 PM

Thank you for entering my contest, Chris, you had everything I was looking for great flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve

Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2018 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Eve. I am honored to have placed so high in your wonderful contest and thrilled that you liked this one so much.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/31/2018 10:42:00 PM

"Affection sprinkled moments' - love that, reminds me of the 'quick love' two in love try to show on their way out the door, or whenever schedules have paths crossing. This is so lovely that the rain isn't a bit cold, in fact, what rain? All the best ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 11/1/2018 10:46:00 AM

I am thrilled you liked this one CayCay. It seemed fitting for the contest subject.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/31/2018 1:31:00 PM

Reminiscent of "Singing in the Rain" with Gene Kelly --- my absolute favorite musical... So sweet! ~ Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/31/2018 1:57:00 PM

Thanks so much. Makes me want to grab an umbrella and swing on a lamp post. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/30/2018 3:20:00 PM

A singing, smooth written rhyme for the contest. Sweet :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/30/2018 3:33:00 PM

Thank you again my friend. I appreciate your kindness.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/30/2018 2:16:00 PM

Hello Chris, oh....this poem is so beautifully written, I felt the love in this poem. Peace nd Love and Joy. Have a nice day my friend.

Chris Green
Date: 10/30/2018 2:49:00 PM

Thank you so very much Darlene. I am happy you enjoyed this one