On the Train

We ride the train at night. Store front signs flash neon onto our faces through the window. Red, green, blue in words we don’t know. Four foreigners crowded in with a hundred faces. They speak in a language we can only catch a few pieces of. We get stern looks from disgusted fellow travelers each time we speak. We travel in silence. But I know what they’re thinking. They don’t need to say it. I can see it in their anger. “You’d think if they are going to be stationed here, they’d learn to speak our language.”

                                          In our arrogance
                                 We think everyone loves us
                                       We are their saviors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Baker Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 4:18 PM
How true, Jerry. powerful Haibun, my friend. Bill
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March 21, 2024 at 4:44 AM
Hello Jerry, What a stirring poem. Your words danced with emotions and your imagery a canvas of introspection, urging us to confront shadows and embrace light. Jerry, these are soulful verses. Blessings, Daniel
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March 21, 2024 at 5:28 PM
Thank you Daniel. I always appreciate your wonderful comments.
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