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On the Trail To Tombstone

mountains morph pink cacti formations cool as Summer sun sets… Doc Holliday and Earps ‘sup pan de campo and beans 2/18/2022 A BRIAN STRAND TANKA

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/24/2022 5:54:00 AM

I feel like you are the cook of the camp, for you know the cowboy lingo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2022 6:16:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/19/2022 8:51:00 PM

You continue to be tops at Tankas, Kim! Keep 'em coming!! (But you can skip the beans next time). ~ Johnny on the Pot

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:05:00 AM

LOL…I rather knew you would have something to say about the beans :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2022 7:58:00 AM

A vibrant tanka makes excellent use of words and concepts, Kim. Well done

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:05:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2022 9:47:00 PM

love this one and how you captured the old west with it

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2022 5:05:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/18/2022 5:22:00 PM

Oh, this is so good, Kim, love the visual.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2022 7:42:00 PM

I love that you love this, Harry! Thank you! <3

Silent One

Date: 2/18/2022 1:53:00 PM

Nice use of words to create a vivid tanka..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2022 7:42:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Silent!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/18/2022 1:51:00 PM

Hi Kim, You penned a well written “ western” themed Tanka. Now I want to watch Tombstone. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/18/2022 7:44:00 PM

Sounds good! Thank you, Alexis!