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On the Trail - Life's Gates

Silent, yet sounding You asked… how, why, what, when, where To parents present... Atmosphere living Grabbing experiences Family teachings With taught imprintings How to live future, prepared By societies; Base value teachings... Who truly rules the roost ‘Well, God and Country’. Curiosities... Atmosphere fits challenges Integrating fun So childhood passes Occasions creating much Opportunity! Cause... many effects Beginning rebellions Meet false imprintings; Secure foundations Crumble under new findings Nature intervenes. School fades away Picking from free choice Next curiosity’s Diversities reign Imprinters no more present Freedom shakes your hand. ___*___ Wilderness trekking One finds Nature’s atmosphere’s Sensing disciplines You then find new truths Things missed, not sensed right before Creating bridges New causeways of life New equations set to need Freedom’s subtleties Land flows and puddles Excitements find new hotels Missed formal rest stops Living by fresh streams Time-chunk pools rented for rest Disturbing, the rich Peace’s and chaos Masters crack imprinting whips “Leave us ours alone!” You ask...’what is mine’ As what was found is real truth Time for final choice. ___*___ As in time’s before... Days fold into days Into elder days. Atmosphere’s there are Covered in clouds you allowed So settle you down Facing debriefings Still living through old habits Children imprinting... As was done to you So you do freely to them Best to rest easy. Universe vibrates Chaos remains free to lie Spinning this world ‘round.

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Date: 4/13/2024 5:48:00 AM
Sometimes we find the truth when we no longer believe in them. God created time but society created how it runs. Who said we had to have lunch by noon? Who said 365 days makes a year? So many man created things focused on us. Great write B.
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