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I loved sailing upon the blue sea, and I was never too far from it, As one who knows sweet cravings, is seldom far from chocolates. In my previous much loved vessel, I had sailed a thousand miles, As rainbows are seen from a distance, bringing on happy smiles. My entire family enjoyed sailing, which I'd mastered in my youth, As the throngs lie ignorant, until the blush dawn moment of truth. I had been to so many places, that I could not recollect them all, As sundry minute details of yesterday, tomorrow declines to recall. Sleepy summer had come, and I had recently purchased a canoe, As the peachy dawn recently arrived, ponders what it should dew. I was taking my canoe out for the first time, on a maiden voyage, Like a yellow canary's first flight, way beyond the emerald foliage, I set out late that afternoon, upon the clear and undulating lake, Shadows were growing longer, with an ebony night in their wake. I finally lay back, utterly contented, and I admired the Milky Way, Like billions of glories of nature, that can be discovered any day! Gentle rocking of my vessel lulled me, and soon I was fast asleep, Like the sleep you have while dreaming, imperturbable and deep. In vivid dreams I was soaring, and in dreams my spirit flew free, As I glided away under pale moonlight, the waves lapping slowly. Not once during that night did I stir, in a vast darkness complete, As mountains are not ever stirring, for at skies they long to peep. The next morning I finally opened my eyes, to four dazzling suns, Some far and some near, and the air was breathable by humans. The sky was a lovely shade of peach, streaked with wispy clouds, And I was still in my canoe, though about reality I had my doubts! I was drifting on a strange still lake, that was the hue of lavender, And on the shore I saw giant blooms, exotic and without number. In shades so unlike any recalled, from the blue planet of my birth, With swirls so colorful and wild, beneath the odd woodland singers. The foliage was much deeper green, than any that I had yet seen, As night is darkest and richest, when the pearly moon fully gleams. The suns were orange red gold and white, the air fresh and balmy, And strange scarlet creatures swam around, babies and a mommy! I was eager to get a look around, and rowed my boat to the shore, As sun must visit many corners of night, for he desires to explore. Soon walking to a clearing, I saw more odd animals flora and trees, And blue mountains in the distance, with lovely birds in the breeze. In the long course of that day, I met a purple alien with huge eyes, We improvised a sign language, amid strange songs from the skies. We had a happy time together, and I made an unforgettable friend, And four suns set in unusual hues, as if starting a new color trend. The planet's name meant roamer, and my friend's name meant rain, For there rain was precious and rarer, and came bearing clear gain. The reddish purple skies, were as dark as that night would become, Until the morning of surprise, when the tranquil night was overcome. Then Rain guided me to my canoe, so I could try to go back home, Like seas returning to the other shore, after long hours have flown. Rain and I hugged and held hands, in bittersweet heartfelt goodbye. Yet I wasn't sure I could get back, but knew I certainly had to try! Once again in my canoe, in the red giant's glow, I noticed a sight, I could not have seen before, in the darkness of earth's last night. It was the gaping door of a hidden compartment, beneath my seat, With a single big red button, that I must have pressed in my sleep. For I had been lying underneath them, dreaming in the moonlight. So waving I repressed the button, as Roamer and Rain left my sight. My head was spinning, and my vision blurred, due to sheer velocity, Yet on my return, the red button was gone-no more space odyssey!

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Date: 10/26/2021 5:04:00 PM
Love: I was taking my canoe out for the first time, on a maiden voyage, Like a yellow canary's first flight, way beyond the emerald foliage// congratulations on POTD!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/26/2021 9:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 10/25/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a creative/wonderful~~story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed autumn day.................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/25/2021 12:27:00 PM
Your warm remarks mean a lot, Paula. Thank you so much. Enjoy your week. :)
Date: 10/25/2021 4:20:00 AM
Your clever poem is a Character Education all on its own Caren! Congrats on your POTD !!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/25/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 10/25/2021 12:27:00 AM
Beautiful long couplet. As your other works, full of feelings and realistic touch. Great and picturesque. Congratulations!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/25/2021 12:24:00 PM
You have my sincerest thanks for a lovely comment. :)
Date: 10/24/2021 10:35:00 PM
True to form, your poetic style, artistic eye, love of nature, rich imagery, and vivid imagination are a delight to the senses, Evelyn. So glad I read this today. Congrats on your POTD honor, and stay inspired!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/25/2021 12:23:00 PM
I will strive to, John. Your expressions of appreciation are pure delight. Thank you so much for your congratulatory remarks. Blessings, Evelyn
Date: 10/24/2021 7:03:00 PM
Evelyn, you paint such a beautiful picture with your words. "Sailing upon the blue sea" ... I enjoy drifting in those moments as well. You have taken me there, my dear friend. I am floating and I am smiling. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2021 7:47:00 PM
I am smiling, too, with the pleasure your words bring, Brandy. Thank you for your very kind words, and for taking this journey with me. Have a blessed week, Evelyn :)
Date: 10/24/2021 6:14:00 PM
A delightful story couplet Judy. Congratulations on the POTD honors.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2021 7:48:00 PM
Thank you for your kind appreciation and congratulations, Jeanne.
Date: 10/24/2021 6:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful honor of receiving g POTD Judy. Blessings xxoo
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2021 7:49:00 PM
Many, many thanks, Connie. xxoo
Date: 10/24/2021 2:43:00 PM
A most interesting entertaining write of strange happenings in the night Evelyn. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2021 3:47:00 PM
You have my heartfelt thanks, Belle.
Date: 10/24/2021 11:29:00 AM
Wow love this very imaginative write. Congrats on potd!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2021 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, my friend.
Date: 10/24/2021 11:03:00 AM
many congrats on POTD Evelyn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2021 3:50:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Jan. Hugs. :)
Date: 10/24/2021 9:54:00 AM
You deserve your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 10/24/2021 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your warm words of congratulations, Victor. :)
Date: 10/24/2021 9:42:00 AM
An enjoyable read Evelyn, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/24/2021 10:00:00 AM
I appreciate your delightful comment very much, Tom. :)
Date: 10/23/2021 1:48:00 AM
Your Science fiction ideas are great. The couplets perfect and the story interesting. Very well done.
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Date: 10/23/2021 10:14:00 AM
Your words of support are a thrill to hear. Thank you very much.
Date: 10/22/2021 8:28:00 PM
Evelyn this is a lovely and astonishing poem. From the first to the last verse, you take the reader through a wonderful tale, combining the oceans and the lands with the tones and colors. This is a masterpiece in my fave.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2021 9:20:00 PM
Lasaad, your kind words of esteem are so nice to hear. Thank you very much for your gratifying remarks, and for the fine compliment of a fave.

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