Joseph May Poet Rhyme

On the Night Breeze

Love finds you yet 
   when the sun sets
 in hues of gold
 A hand to hold

  In moon's  soft glow
   Love finds its flow
 hearts will soon find
 love sweet and kind

 Stars gleam at night
   Shines with love's light
 souls will find bliss
 when they share kiss

 Skies are in tune
   with glow of moon
 Sweet song of love
 Songs of the dove

 On the night breeze
   sways the oak trees
 Soft is the sound
 As love is found

 Stars will shine bright
   Love will take flight
 Songs of the heart
 right from the start

 Clocks seem to stop
   hearts reach the top
 Time stands so still
 with love's sweet thrill

 Hugs warm and tight
   love at first sight
 with lull-a-byes
 so soft the sighs
         --
 1-31-18

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Daniel Turner March 1, 2018 at 10:39 PM Very well written, Joseph. Also very constricting format, proof of your talent:) It's been so long since I've had that feeling, I barely remember. Your poem is the perfect reminder.

Gregory Richard Barden February 15, 2018 at 10:46 PM Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Joseph - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)

Susan Ashley February 6, 2018 at 9:01 PM A lovely and romantic write of sweet love, Joseph. Wonderful imagery and rhymes. Congratulations on your great win.. ~Susan

Roy Pett February 5, 2018 at 7:20 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Joseph, a joy to read. :))

Subimal Sinha-Roy February 5, 2018 at 12:56 AM Congratulations, Joseph on your win with lovely flowing poem.

Sandra Haight February 4, 2018 at 7:22 PM Lovely thoughts in your romantic poem, Joseph. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Line Gauthier February 4, 2018 at 6:32 PM Congrats on your winning poem, Joseph.

Heidi Sands February 4, 2018 at 5:25 PM Congratulations for your win Joseph :)

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2018 at 5:59 PM guess I was wrong. WEnt back to read his contest page and it's not required to give 128 words as title, but I am seeing people do it!

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2018 at 5:48 PM Don't you have to put 128 words on this one? I need to check it out . I think people are doing that challenge really fast.

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2018 at 5:48 PM It's so difficult to do these poems in four syllable four word lines but you pulled off a beaut!!

Akkina Downing February 2, 2018 at 5:21 PM Oh I love this one. It just flow so beautifully! Great job Joseph!

Joanna Daniel February 2, 2018 at 9:09 AM Sweet and love-filled, Joseph:)

John Gondolf February 1, 2018 at 4:02 PM Nicely written, Joseph, I enjoyed this romantic piece. Best of luck. John

Alexis Y. February 1, 2018 at 8:34 AM Hi Joseph, You penned such a beautiful and romantic write for the contest theme. Your imagery is just delightful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Maria Williams February 1, 2018 at 5:15 AM Beautiful, soft and romantic Joseph my friend and so well expressed in just 4 words per line. Loved the poem and the sentiment you've portrayed...Maria

Vijay Pandit January 31, 2018 at 3:37 PM You did well Joseph with the 4 word lines..rhyming lines flow on message!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2018 at 1:20 PM - Yes ... so soft, warm and beautiful, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands January 31, 2018 at 10:00 AM This is beautifully written Joseph. Flows very well too. ! :)