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On the Night Breeze

Love finds you yet when the sun sets in hues of gold A hand to hold In moon's soft glow Love finds its flow hearts will soon find love sweet and kind Stars gleam at night Shines with love's light souls will find bliss when they share kiss Skies are in tune with glow of moon Sweet song of love Songs of the dove On the night breeze sways the oak trees Soft is the sound As love is found Stars will shine bright Love will take flight Songs of the heart right from the start Clocks seem to stop hearts reach the top Time stands so still with love's sweet thrill Hugs warm and tight love at first sight with lull-a-byes so soft the sighs -- 1-31-18

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Date: 3/1/2018 10:39:00 PM
Very well written, Joseph. Also very constricting format, proof of your talent:) It's been so long since I've had that feeling, I barely remember. Your poem is the perfect reminder.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:29:00 PM
Hello Joseph, this poem is beautifully written. I see this poem as a romantic rhyme. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/15/2018 10:46:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Joseph - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/6/2018 9:01:00 PM
A lovely and romantic write of sweet love, Joseph. Wonderful imagery and rhymes. Congratulations on your great win.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Joseph, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 2/5/2018 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Joseph on your win with lovely flowing poem.
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Date: 2/4/2018 7:22:00 PM
Lovely thoughts in your romantic poem, Joseph. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2018 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Joseph.
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Date: 2/4/2018 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Joseph :)
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Date: 2/2/2018 5:59:00 PM
guess I was wrong. WEnt back to read his contest page and it's not required to give 128 words as title, but I am seeing people do it!
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Date: 2/2/2018 5:48:00 PM
It's so difficult to do these poems in four syllable four word lines but you pulled off a beaut!!
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Date: 2/2/2018 5:48:00 PM
Don't you have to put 128 words on this one? I need to check it out . I think people are doing that challenge really fast.
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Date: 2/2/2018 5:21:00 PM
Oh I love this one. It just flow so beautifully! Great job Joseph!
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:09:00 AM
Sweet and love-filled, Joseph:)
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Date: 2/1/2018 4:02:00 PM
Nicely written, Joseph, I enjoyed this romantic piece. Best of luck. John
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Date: 2/1/2018 8:34:00 AM
Hi Joseph, You penned such a beautiful and romantic write for the contest theme. Your imagery is just delightful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/1/2018 5:15:00 AM
Beautiful, soft and romantic Joseph my friend and so well expressed in just 4 words per line. Loved the poem and the sentiment you've portrayed...Maria
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Date: 1/31/2018 3:37:00 PM
You did well Joseph with the 4 word lines..rhyming lines flow on message!
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Date: 1/31/2018 1:20:00 PM
- Yes ... so soft, warm and beautiful, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2018 10:00:00 AM
This is beautifully written Joseph. Flows very well too. ! :)
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