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On the Hunt

Sat on the barstool, elegant poise mantis like, males are devoured comp entry original piece 01042016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2016 7:44:00 PM

oops. sorry, i think I just saw Victor's poem, so his name was still in my mind. Congrats to YOU, STEPHEN.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2016 7:40:00 PM

glad to see this one again. Congrats, Victor.

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/13/2016 10:49:00 PM

Very cleverly balanced to devour. Excellent poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/14/2016 3:34:00 AM

many thanks for stopping by, and your comments stephen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2016 8:41:00 PM

Stephen, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 2:04:00 PM

Clever and unique monoku, Stephen! I'm out of there:) Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/14/2016 11:40:00 AM

...back with congratulations, Stephen...well done!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/2/2016 10:48:00 PM

I don't know if crane is the right word (I know preying mantis husbands are devoured by their mates ... lol) ... funny imagination you have, I like the 'ku.

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/3/2016 4:19:00 PM

amended if it wins call it a joint effort lol

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/3/2016 1:55:00 AM

cheers , good point :-) hubby for dinner

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 6:58:00 PM

a very unique one in the contest!! Reminds me of Manhunter!! Maybe she found them in the bars!! (looking for Mr. Goodbar!)

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/2/2016 1:36:00 AM

Is unique good , hope so lol googled the film can see what your saying many thanks

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2016 9:41:00 AM

oh this is VERY clever stephen:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/1/2016 10:00:00 AM

we don't stand a chance lol poor males lol